|
|
|
|
| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
01-22-04, 05:38 AM
|
#1
|
||||||
|
New to RB
|
exorsist
IP: 4937 BAA0
yeah heres another special
you neva wanna mess cuz the best dont mess yeah i killed ya crew dont stress what u a boy ya wearin a dress i got more,u got less you a little bitch ya so annoyin ya make my blood itch i m gonna kill ya like the exorcist im gonna kill ya till ya sole no longa exists |
||||||
|
|
|
01-22-04, 05:41 AM
|
#2
|
|||
|
Banned: Biting
|
IP: A43A FC5B
it was ok for a beginner, try to change the structure and use better vocab and wordplay. peace
|
|||
|
|
|
01-22-04, 06:11 AM
|
#3
|
||||
|
Eddy.
|
IP: 77D5 6AAD
4 Words rhyming, .. at the start.. bad vocab usage, bad content, it was short..an ok flow, .. but this was useless, sorry.
__________________
Fuck you |
||||
  
|
|
|
01-22-04, 07:17 AM
|
#4
|
||||
|
Light Weight
|
IP: DF7B C8F7
everything about that piece was basic
and lines were too short but youve only just joined so youll learn put out some more open mics and when u get feed back it will help u elevate |
||||
|
|
|
01-22-04, 03:42 PM
|
#5
|
||||||
|
Banned
|
IP: FF92 7263
shit now read mine
|
||||||
|
|
|
01-22-04, 05:03 PM
|
#6
|
|||||||
|
New to RB
|
IP: 051A C701
yo guess hu it is i go 2 ur skool saw u makin dat shit up 2day c'mon u can do betta make it longer look at mine 2 its preety crap
peace FROM FATTY M*TT* |
|||||||
|
|
 |
| Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Linear Mode
