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Old 01-26-04, 12:56 PM   #1
ELEETE
"The Eleete"
 
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Your My Worst Enemy (PLEASE READ!!! Took me 15 Min)

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Yo i wrote this real quick.........The chorus was prethought but the verses i just wrote like 15 minutes ago.....whatever hate if you want.........enjoy an thanks............

Your My Worst Enemy
Written By: Luis "Eleete" Castillo

[Chorus][2x]
Take a look in my eyes
Tell me what do you see//
A reflection of hate
That I'm sure you'll agree//
Tears fall down my face//
Cause the sadness thats built in me//
No matter how i see it
Your my worst enemy//

As i stare into space, I sit alone in da lab//
Escapin my thoughts watchin the ink seep through this pad//
Its kinda sad, visions of anger an hate play through my head//
To know that, i would give up my life in exchange to be dead//
But instead, im still sitting right here//
Holdin back these tears that ive been fightin for years//
Ill just stop right here an finally end it//
The outcome i foresee i never intended//
It seems so demented but this life just isnt for me//
When comes down to it, your my worst enemy//
It aint helpin me, to drown myself in my misery//
But all that i have is my verbal artillery//
Are you hearing me? This shit is making me sick//
You might be askin where is he goin wit this?//
Nowhere!!! im burryin myself in it!!!//
The music, my pen,...my rhyme book an shit!!!//

[Chorus][2x]
Take a look in my eyes
Tell me what do you see//
A reflection of hate
That I'm sure you'll agree//
Tears fall down my face//
Cause the sadness thats built in me//
No matter how i see it
Your my worst enemy//

Im not gonna waste my time on complexity of words//
Thats absurd, cause to be good, thats all i ever heard//
Who the fuck are you to judge me on how to be an emcee//
Somebody help me to be something that you want me to be//
Cause you aint feeling me, you mothafuckaz think that im wack//
That im crap? fuck rap!! you can all have it back//
Your on crack!! I love the music with all of my heart//
Im tired of bitches tellin me how to perfect the art//
You think your smart but i know your just a kid //
On the other side tellin me how to be ill an shit//
Eat a dick!! now you can go snitch an run to your mom//
Tell her another dude cussed you out on RapBattles.com//
This shit is rediculous but i see it all the time//
Wit Penskills, Word~Perfect an all of my rhymes//
I guess its just so sad to see//
You dont believe me? Take a look in my eyes an you'll see//


[Chorus][2x]
Take a look in my eyes
Tell me what do you see//
A reflection of hate
That I'm sure you'll agree//
Tears fall down my face//
Cause the sadness thats built in me//
No matter how i see it
Your my worst enemy//
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