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02-03-04, 02:24 AM | #1 | |||||||
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One of ma first songs eva (Lone Solja)
IP: 2956 CBE7
LONE SOLJA http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/freshemceemusic.htm its lone solja, i got others there too. i've made quite a bit. juz some helpful feed back wud be nice. hope ya'll get da meaning behind it. da quality isnt gr8 but i bought a new mic recently and i mite re record. -1-
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02-03-04, 03:20 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 835E 5ADB
* Listening *...beat is kool...i def like this beat...its got that vibe to it..like it makes u wanna do something...hmm...flow is ehh..not really on point...that's a major issue...lryics are aight...creative...well not really..but u know what i mean...your right..quality isn't that great...the beat is louder than ur voice...with the new mic u got..that should help..just work with the volume...but the 1 thing u did...was stay consistent...and that's a big factor...overall...i give this track a 6/10...props..keep doin ya thang...stay up dude...
if u can...check out my new song..47 Popstars.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111395 feedback is much appreciated homie... Thanx.... and One Luv Man... ~KJ~
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02-03-04, 03:27 AM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 2956 CBE7
thanks homie, im checking ur song out now uppin
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"First we lost Eazy, then we lost Pac
Biggie got killed when the shit gon' stop" Layzee Bone, Change Tha World "With every dark night, there's a bright day after that"
Tupac Shakur, Me Against Tha World ____________
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02-03-04, 06:43 AM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: B4AC 694E
Beat is pretty much cheesy, sounds like someone just found the 808 drum machine.
Flow, choppy, delivery the same. Voice, ehhh.....lyrics... not really feelin this here man, sorry http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111810 .OnE HuNeD'.
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Originally Posted by sdizzle any song i made with lyrics i didn't have a program to play the beat at the same time i recorded, so any song i made i spit acapella and tried to blend it into the best |
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02-04-04, 02:05 AM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: A6E6 6870
yeh aiight uppin still............................................. ..................................
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"First we lost Eazy, then we lost Pac
Biggie got killed when the shit gon' stop" Layzee Bone, Change Tha World "With every dark night, there's a bright day after that"
Tupac Shakur, Me Against Tha World ____________
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