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Old 02-03-04, 02:24 AM   #1
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One of ma first songs eva (Lone Solja)

IP: 2956 CBE7

LONE SOLJA

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/freshemceemusic.htm

its lone solja, i got others there too. i've made quite a bit.
juz some helpful feed back wud be nice. hope ya'll get da meaning behind it. da quality isnt gr8 but i bought a new mic recently and i mite re record.
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Old 02-03-04, 03:20 AM   #2
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* Listening *...beat is kool...i def like this beat...its got that vibe to it..like it makes u wanna do something...hmm...flow is ehh..not really on point...that's a major issue...lryics are aight...creative...well not really..but u know what i mean...your right..quality isn't that great...the beat is louder than ur voice...with the new mic u got..that should help..just work with the volume...but the 1 thing u did...was stay consistent...and that's a big factor...overall...i give this track a 6/10...props..keep doin ya thang...stay up dude...

if u can...check out my new song..47 Popstars....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111395

feedback is much appreciated homie...

Thanx....

and One Luv Man...

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Old 02-03-04, 03:27 AM   #3
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thanks homie, im checking ur song out now uppin
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Old 02-03-04, 06:43 AM   #4
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Beat is pretty much cheesy, sounds like someone just found the 808 drum machine.

Flow, choppy, delivery the same. Voice, ehhh.....lyrics...

not really feelin this here man, sorry

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111810

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any song i made with lyrics i didn't have a program to play the beat at the same time i recorded, so any song i made i spit acapella and tried to blend it into the best
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Old 02-04-04, 02:05 AM   #5
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yeh aiight uppin still............................................. ..................................
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