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02-04-04, 08:15 PM | #1 | ||||||
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My first flow
IP: D481 B40D
(Please bear in mind I have a London accent)
Dedicated to all the young mothers who understand where Im coming from! Feedback Please undefined Yeah yo, I came here on pure faith But on MY mothers disgrace See shed be all up In my face If she saw me in this place But its all good And mammas gonna go wild ‘cause the sitters at home and she’s minding my child well its been a busy week and although Im lackin’ sleep this party vibe calls so out this mamma crawls ‘cause although I love my baby boo I also love my freedom too Its time I got a break Tonight Im’a stay out late Please don’t start a debate Don’t come be bringing hate My child’s safe in bed Oh my little sleepy head As I left the words I said… Breath See ya tomorrow boo I read him a story too Now he’s a sleep till the morning new I said he’s gonna sleep the WHOLE night though My little babsy babby boo Goo goo One smile lights up my heart one “mamma” His word a piece of Art his face my day it starts and it ends an extension of me my trusted friend a love that never ever ends but back to me tonight you see a P>A>R>T>Y party a chance to dance my stress behind clear my head my thoughts refined but when I return I trust I see My baby boo A lust in me Lust A love You want all the time Did I really have to define that in my rhyme but for all the people who don’t think like me Ill let you in tonight into my clarity I understand my thoughts stay free Guess its all just part of being me And its not so bad Breath SEE HIS SMILE MAKES UP FOR THAT STRESS I HAVE And leaves my brain the mess not bad To figure out As I catch this break Just make sure Im not back too late I wont drink too much cause a hangover ain’t good I wouldn’t be able to handle babby like I should So to all my friends stay strong for me Realise my times on priority My babby first then maybe me I still love you all And you should see this all makes sense when you’re a young Mum like me! |
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02-12-04, 02:47 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: FE07 2ACC
Guess theirs no other mummas mc-ing out there?
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02-12-04, 04:11 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 1BF7 CF19
This was alright i thought.....the meaning was there.....had emotion in it....it seemed to flow ok for the most part i think, some parts it lost the flow of things.....it seemed simple though try making it more complex....but overall it was alright...keep at it.
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02-12-04, 09:40 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: DC2D 7924
ha ha ha you are funny man. I lived in ireland for a year and is dangerous as shit especially in july. all the flags and marches and automatic pistols and ski masks. Ireland is a war zone. Cops die and nothing happens to the killers. You live in a dangerous place so I give you credit.RAP ABOUT THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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