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0 | 0% |
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4 | 100.00% |
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ghostie vs cutastraphe
IP: C1DA C961
i think i;s 10 line max
house rules due in 45 min's aight |
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IP: C1DA C961
yo i'm gonna say this
go over 10 its coo.... i may do more peace |
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IP: ED3C 7BC1
tops 10 mins for me.
check check yo. upcheckup YO. |
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IP: C1DA C961
aight yo
you 0-3 that's a shame, i even got more losses you aint even got a win yet, you kno wuts more worthless i could use the force, but i don't need shit to dead you and tell fantazee, you can't get that bitch to have sex with you your a waste of trash, but still i'll throw you out a ghostly image it takes one breath to blow you out sorry to dissapoint, your bars are wut did it so choppy and messed up, it looks like a sars exibit u startin with the man, so be ready to book cutastraphe ghost and my machete are hooked aight dun peace |
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IP: ED3C 7BC1
lovein the college pussy, so it was a nice suprise u pre-med
ya words, a pre-cog against a 0-3 head thats already dead said u didnt have time but howm i supposed to know when ur constantly on invisible mode, too slow to comprehend my birds? here have another,flipin more words then ggw camera and girls shirts cut never had a full 10 so hes lost for anything close s unfamilliar turf apparently as i tryed turnin the outcome on u, found ya face doom[peepavatar] i cut him the face, ast him rap he? gushed red handed, rep ruined Ghostie instill in mc my realness, be that a factor when you hearing sets of booing im tryna book u in the system of the best, but found out ur just documental movies makin u a docoumental history |
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IP: B910 8CBB
yoooooooo lets get some votes!!!
uppin peepz leave a link i'll peep it |
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Dont Push Me Of Regret It
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IP: 92E6 7769
ghostie took dis straight up!!cutastraphe bit short dawg!bit longer verse frm u and bin a closer battle
VOTE:ghostie Reture da fava
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IP: C1DA C961
^learn how to vote, kidd. before droppin that pathetic excuse for a vote. anyways, uppin this for votes!!
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IP: F978 8610
you 0-3 that's a shame, i even got more losses
you aint even got a win yet, you kno wuts more worthless Not a very strong opener, and losses and worthless didnt rhyme together i could use the force, but i don't need shit to dead you and tell fantazee, you can't get that bitch to have sex with you Never did like it when the lines ended in the same word, punch wasnt that great your a waste of trash, but still i'll throw you out a ghostly image it takes one breath to blow you out Decent punch, liked the 'ghostly image' play on sorry to dissapoint, your bars are wut did it so choppy and messed up, it looks like a sars exibit You coulda made this a better punch if you changed up the 1st line, liked the idea u startin with the man, so be ready to book cutastraphe ghost and my machete are hooked OK closer, nothing too fancy, but it works lovein the college pussy, so it was a nice suprise u pre-med ya words, a pre-cog against a 0-3 head thats already dead Nice said u didnt have time but howm i supposed to know when ur constantly on invisible mode, too slow to comprehend my birds? here have another,flipin more words then ggw camera and girls shirts cut never had a full 10 so hes lost for anything close s unfamilliar turf Didnt really care for the structure here, punches were shadowed by the poor structure apparently as i tryed turnin the outcome on u, found ya face doom[peepavatar] i cut him the face, ast him rap he? gushed red handed, rep ruined I was lost here Ghostie instill in mc my realness, be that a factor when you hearing sets of booing im tryna book u in the system of the best, but found out ur just documental movies makin u a docoumental history This would have been a great ending punch, but in my opinion you should have tried to make just 2 lines and rhymed something with history or something...good idea, creative Overall - Hard to decide on this one, so i looked at the mistakes and re-read it and decided that Ghostie got this one. Not by much, but he brought a lil more to the table. Vote: Ghostie .. peace |
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Still Sick
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IP: 996D 1A54
okay..a below average battle..
cut..your verse bar didnt rhyme that well..it was forced..punches wasnt at large in this battle. and it shows in your second bar..only bar I did like was the ghostly line..flow was decent..not too great..not too bad either..try to even up your lines a lil more..they dont have to be perfect..but,..that cant be all stretched.. ghostie..you put up a good battle..I was really expecting you to lose..which in my opinion you did..but let me explain why..your punches was..forced..all of them..it's like..that birds line..wtf do that mean?..I coulnt even comprehand your birds ![]() my vote..Cut http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ht=dirtyendzone hit that up^^ |
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IP: 244A F706
Alright, yo.. I think this wasn't too good on either side of the battle. I know you can both post verse much better then that. Cut.. i'm not seeing the creativity that I usually see in ur verse.. but u had some ok punches. Ghostie, I read ur verse 3 times, the third very slowly. I don't know man.. just wasn't working for me. In my mind, cut got u with better punches and pers. Just my opinion..
vote-cut
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Fuck yo couch
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IP: DD8A D068
you 0-3 that's a shame, i even got more losses
you aint even got a win yet, you kno wuts more worthless Weak opener, used filler i could use the force, but i don't need shit to dead you and tell fantazee, you can't get that bitch to have sex with you Alright your a waste of trash, but still i'll throw you out a ghostly image it takes one breath to blow you out Decent punch sorry to dissapoint, your bars are wut did it so choppy and messed up, it looks like a sars exibit Rhymed choppy, but good concept u startin with the man, so be ready to book cutastraphe ghost and my machete are hooked Decent closer lovein the college pussy, so it was a nice suprise u pre-med ya words, a pre-cog against a 0-3 head thats already dead Garbage said u didnt have time but howm i supposed to know when ur constantly on invisible mode, too slow to comprehend my birds? Wak here have another,flipin more words then ggw camera and girls shirts cut never had a full 10 so hes lost for anything close s unfamilliar turf Flip some multis next time apparently as i tryed turnin the outcome on u, found ya face doom[peepavatar] i cut him the face, ast him rap he? gushed red handed, rep ruined Decent personal Ghostie instill in mc my realness, be that a factor when you hearing sets of booing im tryna book u in the system of the best, but found out ur just documental movies decent Good job keeping it creative, but your other stuff was played Vote - Cut
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IP: CC27 D3DF
ghost won this >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>......................
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token
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IP: 4577 CD9A
SWING THAT'S NOT A VOTE. U HAVE TO BREAK IT DOWN DROP A VALID RESPONSE WHY HE WON. AND U POLLED THAT TOO U CRACK HEAD!!
anyways uppin. for some more votes |
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\/ pissing me off!!!!
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IP: 95BE 951D
cutastraphe
you 0-3 that's a shame, i even got more losses you aint even got a win yet, you kno wuts more worthless didnt even ryhme? 3/10 i could use the force, but i don't need shit to dead you and tell fantazee, you can't get that bitch to have sex with you prety weak man, 4/10 your a waste of trash, but still i'll throw you out a ghostly image it takes one breath to blow you out nice play on his name, 6/10 sorry to dissapoint, your bars are wut did it so choppy and messed up, it looks like a sars exibit nice idea, bad wordplay, 5/10 u startin with the man, so be ready to book cutastraphe ghost and my machete are hooked bad closer, 4/10 pretty weak verse man, i know you can come harder than this overall 22/50 ghostie lovein the college pussy, so it was a nice suprise u pre-med ya words, a pre-cog against a 0-3 head thats already dead wasn't really feelin this, not too bad 5/10 said u didnt have time but howm i supposed to know when ur constantly on invisible mode, too slow to comprehend my birds? wtf, a wack non ryhming punch, 3/10 here have another,flipin more words then ggw camera and girls shirts cut never had a full 10 so hes lost for anything close s unfamilliar turf again pretty wack, 4/10 apparently as i tryed turnin the outcome on u, found ya face doom[peepavatar] i cut him the face, ast him rap he? gushed red handed, rep ruined played, i seen the doom punch before used on him, 5/10 Ghostie instill in mc my realness, be that a factor when you hearing sets of booing im tryna book u in the system of the best, but found out ur just documental movies why does most of your verse not ryhme, 3/10 make yor shit ryhme, comprhenable, an fix your structure. overall 22/50 my vote cut
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