Not Enough To Be A Dope Emcee (Your My Worst Enemy Pt. 2)
Written By: ELEETE

You know man.......Im tired of all this hatin goin on........
you know..............fuck this man........lets go...........

[Chorus] [2x]
Tell me what's Hip Hop?
Tell me what's Rap?//
Define the difference of what's good an what's wack? Explain that!//
Do I fall under the category of Plain Crap?!//
Am I not Ill enough to spit on all o' my main tracks?!//

When I started off they wanted my content to be complex//
"ELEETE your flows to plain you need to come wit that bomb text!"//
"You need better wordplay an your vocab lacked"//
"You need to go back inda lab an take your whole Rap back"//
Man fuck that! How do you define the music of Hip Hop an Rap!//
And put a label on it an you decide what's good an what's wack?!//
Man I already proved in INFLUENCE that i can be lyrical//
But all my otha shit gets dissed cause I don't play wit my words or use syllables//
And dispense metaphores....Shit what the fuck is the music for?!//
If there's a layout of instructions layed out to you before?!//
Whatever happen to emotion an feeling?!//
I guess Hip Hop an Rap nowadays have a different meaning//
I love this music but if thats the direction of Hip Hop//
Then all I have to say is.......fuck this yo I'm moving to Rock//

[Chorus] [2x]
Tell me what's Hip Hop?
Tell me what's Rap?//
Define the difference of what's good an what's wack? Explain that!//
Do I fall under the category of Plain Crap?!//
Am I not Ill enough to spit on all o' my main tracks?!//

Well I'm crap, so I guess I still wonder why I even continue to Rap?//
About my struggles in life, an all of my things inda past//
Apparently that's what I thought we as Emcees all stood for//
To love an cherish the music that we've come to adore, but that aint the case no more//
To tell the stories of our lives an learn from one another//
Battle ourselves an earn respect from each other!!!//
I will never be your puppet bitch hangin by YOUR strings//
I will do what I can to make the REAL music survive by any means!!!//
That's if theres any of it left by the time i get done with this shit!!!//
I should grab hold, take the mic an just split//
Cause i think I'm goin through another personality shift//
Soon ELEETE you'll forget, an sayin this shit ill never regret//
Fuck Hip Hop, Fuck Rap!!! Fuck every mothafucka that said I'm wack!!!!//
Just cause they say I cant Rap like "THAT"?!!! ....If this is Hip Hop....Fuck it you can have it back.....//

[Chorus] [2x]
Tell me what's Hip Hop?
Tell me what's Rap?//
Define the difference of what's good an what's wack? Explain that!//
Do I fall under the category of Plain Crap?!//
Am I not Ill enough to spit on all o' my main tracks?!//

....Yo I'd just like to thank an pay my respect to all the TRUE Emcee's that helped me elevate.........
Thanks to: Word~Perfect, Up Yours, James Bondage, A-Glock, west, TSheff, McSnypa03,
Pedro Nok, GameTime, Translucant, Dev, $pitacular, Explict, High Class, MC PINACLE,
Word Definate, Avalonious, Born to Kill, Johnny 6-Feet, an last but not least Penskills.......
And fuck you to all who dissed me!!!.....Peace....

nice..I can where you are coming from..this a great scheme..and once again this would amke a great audio(along with many others of your rhymes)you are one of the most underrated textcees out there..peace...

seen the concept before... but thought you came at it pretty good, at times the flow struggled with a couple of stretched lines, but the way you told the story was good, and ya carried the rhyming decent, in places it could have been carried further, insead of starting a new flow on the next line, keep it going.... yeah decent drop, kept me reading, i see potential....

Concept Has Been Used Before, But I Was Feelin Your Approach. . Flow Was Consistent, Althought Some Lines Were A Bit Stretched, That Didn't Hamper The Flow. . Multi's Were Nice, Although You Over Used The Rap Rhyme In This Piece. . Meaning You Had The Last Word On A Line Rhyming With Rap Too Many Times, Just Watch That. . I Can Tell By The Message That Were Really Trying For Vocab, So No Worries On That. . Content Was Good Man, Chorus Was Pretty Good Too. . Overall, You Are Improving With Every Drop And I Hope To Continue To See This Upward Trend, Pz.

Just cause they say I cant Rap like "THAT"!!! ....If this is Hip Hop....Fuck it you can have it back.....//
^ ^ Real Dope Way To Close The Track Before The Final Chorus.



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Pretty dope ish here,liked the concept and the way u approached it,nice emotion in this track,good hook and you addressed everything that makes up a good verse then dismissed the need for it(well done) i know wot u were talkin bout coz i feel the same,hip hop and music is expression so if kat's think sumin is wack coz it wasn't the norm or never had the supposed key elemnets of a good track,they are worng coz a song is bout meanin and expression not a fukin english essay,feel me?

Peace

Thank you for your remarks so far.........^^

another bomb ass scheme and delivery from Eleete...heads up bitches...hes clear crowds

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Cmon dont sleep on this!!! Uppin!!

tight shit concept has been done but you kinda get a sense of emotion in this spit i wouldnt mind hearing it in audio form to get the full just of it overall nice flow

They say the topic has been done, and there right. But this wasnt like all the others, ya know. There was something that made it diffrent than the others. I dont know what, but there is somthing... It was a decent piece, maybe work on your chorus, cause those make a big diffrence in your raps. Maybe work on the structure and creativity. Over all this was pretty nice, your elevating at a nice pace hommie, good work... ~1~

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^^^^^uppin Thanks^^^^^

I feel raw emotion in this. I can tell it's not your best work. But your best is years to come if you keep the emotion glowing (oops) flowing like that. Dont worry what we haters say. We get a voice too. And if its for any reason other than skill or potential it's a lie (when it comes to hating). If they want more multi's or punches let them write'em!! You do what you do!! Holla.

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nice concept and not a bad hook, i see a lot of people who can't write decent hooks

everything is decent, but shorten ur lines up..if u were to go audio the delivery on this would be horrible unless u rap about as fast as twista or have a slow ass beat

but since it's not audio, i give it 7.9/10

i'm harsh and i only give 9-10 to the perfect or close to it... so don't take a 7.9 as an insult

this was a well done topic.. i feel it would sound better on audio.. but as text its ight.. some parts were nice and the rest was just coo.. keep up the good work..