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02-17-04, 02:49 AM | #1 | ||||||
This is my first post!
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Sektion wants an enemy....
IP: D483 52B5
I started out unknown
now im buildin my step up This Sektion is now known So prepare to get f**ked up- Yo, Im sick of these pathetic rhymers wasting my time on their bullsh*t one liners its a crime every time they write when it comes to open mic (i tell em) dont even bother asking for my autograph coz ill tear the paper outright light it up then ill fight ur ass every night despite your height of 6ft 4 youll get knocked to tha floor and then one up for me ur still begging for more u should be dreading my raw attack u'll be regretting my diss track *spac attack* ur face will be smacked from my bat ill retract my verbal damage and turn over the page so another shit MC can feel the wrath of my rage- <Sektion> This is my first time so DONT go easy on me. |
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02-17-04, 02:57 PM | #2 | ||||
Word.
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IP: 9058 C066
Start replying to other peoples Open Mics.
But this wasnt that good though.....you need to elevate a bit.....structure needs to be fixed up, try to make your lines a little longer and even them out a bit to help the flow out in your piece....try adding some multies as well....but keep at it. |
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