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People try-ta fight me tryin to strike my year's And all these heartless people tryna hide-they-tears But as bloodshed's we all let our heart's Go down in dirt' Just cause they're gone, dont mean there soul stays in the earth Just hear me out, Cuz this whole place is hurtin' Got hookers runnin there day job's, and fuckin hoes flirtin' All these playas try 2 act', But this scene has no curtains' Wreckage with a smile, Smoke come's out why he's smerkin' Rap isnt about these newb's or "sworn vets" Come to My hood and try to talk some sense Come out with a new access whole to ya chest' Seein people die, Hoping I could get that blessed But in the end it's fate and crazily' Happens ery'day Only time I have alone is when My hands cross b4 I pray God please hear me, My dream's are solid-shit Hanging out with "hitmen", Not even rappers but man they make some "hits" ``` If I injected Myself with lead' would it be suicide to you' Wanna be in a room with a suicidal Guy you'knew Wishing You can leave but he has a fucking gun to Tryna run away and all these bullets flying at-chu Make a break for the stairs'Why is he like this? Shootin lead at me asking, Why u trying 2 hide-kid' God please get this guy the fuck away from me Im running my nut's off, But like duracell I have no "everlasting"Energy He finally caught me, and asked me one thing I wanted 2 say b4 I die' Please shelter Me from the demons deep inside..... I woke up in a hospital, and I never left my house' What kinda dream did I have, And why is my cock'hangin' Out? Lmao Peep this The last lines a twist
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
THIS IS DOPE AZ FUCK!!! you got somthing solid here. your rhyme's are on point aswell as you flow. The meaning to the whole peice is dope....... nice drop . keep them coming..pz
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Houdini
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IP: 0825 899A
Fuck yea man Thanx for the feed Ill return the favor bro Uppin
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Houdini
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IP: 3240 794D
uppin lol i want peeps 2 see this
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Houdini
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IP: 28AD 5545
Uppin! Damn dont sleep on this......dont sleep
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IP: 2041 AFC0
That was hottt man,,....
But as bloodshed's we all let our heart's Go down in dirt' Just cause they're gone, dont mean there soul stays in the earth ^Nice I like that bit predictable but nice hit hard^ But in the end it's fate and crazily' Happens ery'day Only time I have alone is when My hands cross b4 I pray God please hear me, My dream's are solid-shit Hanging out with "hitmen", Not even rappers but man they make some "hits" ^Nice barz man hott drop and the close was funny as fuck stay up man... 1~ |
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Houdini
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IP: 3F1B 4C86
Thanx fer the feed man, Uppin
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Houdini
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IP: 0825 899A
uppin for feed .
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IP: 28AD 5545
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I Dont Really Get Why Its Getting That Much Love... Here's How I See It... You Show POTENTIAL, But Just Simple Things Could Make It Better... One Of The Biggest Things Would Be Flow... People Were Saying Your Rhyms Were On Point But I Dunno What Point That Would Be.... You've Gotta Tryn Use A Two Word Multi Scheme Atleast At The End... And Try To Slip It In And Intwine It Throught Out The Whole Line... Cuz If You Do That And You Perfect That... You Start To Add Two Multi Sequences Into It And Just Have The Different Patters Switch Off... Making The Flow Just Very Contagious... Cuz To Me I Couldnt Really Feel The Flow... To Me Flow Isnt Right Unless You Can Flow It WITHOUGHT A Beat... Just My Thoughts Mayn... Keep Doing It Though, I Can See You Getting Bigger The More You Elevate... .One. |
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Houdini
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IP: 3240 794D
Thanx man Not everyone see's it that way Uppin
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Houdini
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IP: 0825 899A
Uppin This.....................................
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 3240 794D
God Damn Dat Is Hot Lol
I Like It Mayne Dis Shit Is D.o.p.e Keep It Up I C U Elevate Dis An Dope Solid Piece Keep It Up Wreckage Dats Hot~! ~peace~ |
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UNTESTABLE
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IP: C683 8CDB
thats a good drop man, nothing much else to say but keep doing ya thing!!
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 3375 4717
NOt as dope it looks like you tryede to put potential in it but wen its really read its iiight but not as good didnt really get the titel but it was iight you really elevated since you came here nice shit
rating 6/10
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Houdini
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IP: 28AD 5545
uppin for feed lol
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