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04-07-04, 01:53 PM
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Thug
IP: 80EF 45DD
everyone has a different meaning of the word thug
is it a person that does a drug is there really one meaning to the word everyone jus' speaks of what they heard i don't understand i'm confused to not kno how this word is used plz help me wat u think could u tell me 1 day of this week how can 1 word be used so many ways it makes me feel like i'm in a haze or is it jus' cause i'm in a blaze
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04-09-04, 10:44 AM
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It was ok, it had a pretty good flow, just try to work on the vocabulary. Try to use some "bigger" words, but keep the flow though.
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05-04-04, 08:53 PM
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agreed. also you have some REALLY short lines. this ain't a damn limerick! Try using words that are more specific also.
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