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02-14-04, 10:22 PM | #1 | |||||||
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even though its not the hardest, ive had it hard///
life is cold and dirty like a tragic whole planet war/// and i feel like the only surviver, left out on my own/// not only did i loose my job, but got kicked outta my home/// im outta control, society created ghettos like another death valley/// so many in my family, have to struggle and sleep in the allies// sadly, the government and moral people arent even bothered/// i got roaches bigger than cats, and no running water/// were all being slaughtered, and im sufficating like a coffin covered with dirt my TV is a mircowave, and my oven dont work// and i dont work, sold all my belongings for profit// my whole closet, i even sold pet mice who lived in my faucet/// ive lost, welfare gots me making more money then my job did// i caught my self waiting outside the school just to rob kids/// i dont take caution, like a drunk driver speeding/// i dont care when, where or how, as long as im eating/// im stressed, i dont really need all this hassle//// my car is more broke down then the Loch Ness Castle// its a handful, living day to day, dont know where to run to/// you feel like a quarter, when 3 bums try to jump you/// i come through hell and stop to smell the flowers// but all i smell is me,......needing a shower/// my clothes have more holes than a golf course in a meteor shower its a tragic war that involves half of the planet/// i cant stand it......if this is life, god you can have it// if you ever see me looking at you, its cause i walked into on coming traffic KEYSTYLE................feedback plz
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02-14-04, 11:04 PM | #2 | |||||||
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dammit!!!!! I will read all of your entire rhymes because it's worth it. I hate reading too, but I love reading your stuff man..you got talent that I wish I had. now come to the cypher and get yo ass beat
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02-14-04, 11:08 PM | #3 | ||||||
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nice mna. Easy to read while not being simple. Loved this piece it wasnt forced but everything fitted in nicley. props man...
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02-15-04, 10:25 AM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 9B04 91FE
thanks
and just so eveyone knows its not about me just some fictional story thanks 4 feed
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GangGreen "It aint all about economy///So the fact that all these wack MC's is makin G's dont bother me///Honestly, my number one policy is quality"
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02-15-04, 11:35 AM | #5 | |||||||
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Impresive, Couple of lines in there were played...But u did a good job staying on subject...The closer was ILL, I liked That....
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