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sup new to the board
IP: 047D 3076
jus to start
I spit sick, see my verbs are multiplying// You catch static vibes my flows electrifying// Intertwining with cause rhymes breed like intercourse// Opening doors to your mind and start mental wars// Endorse with a primal force that’s scientific// Rip ya flow with a style that’s canablelistic// It’s sick shit-twisted-some say I’m sadistic// Spitting hells fire leaving my tongue blistered// Through illness in time I breed like bacteria// Spreading seeds of rap with my own criteria// I’m superia-your supernatural your styles fiction// You don’t hold the throne cos. you cant stand the friction// British lions defying the game through the alliance// With compliance we run the game who spits the science// Were the giants got your heads dazed crazed with violence// Leave you paraplegic so now your life’s silenced// .....peace |
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IP: 340D 8B8F
This was alright here.....just lose the // at the end of your lines, dont really need them....structure was alright, could be touched up a bit but it was good.....the flow to this was good i thought, it flowed well....you had some nice vocab in this...overall a alright piece...keep at it.
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New to RB
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IP: 92E6 7769
thanx man....notes taken....uppin
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