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View Poll Results: Untouched .vs. 1ndeph
1ndeph 3 50.00%
Un'Touched 3 50.00%
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Old 06-14-05, 05:03 PM   #1
Un'Touched
†•The Council Nigga •†
 
1ndeph vs Un'Touched

IP: B91A F28C

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6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


30 min to check in
30 to spit


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-14-05 at 05:33 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.
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Old 06-14-05, 05:04 PM   #2
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1ndeph has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 05:04 PM.
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Old 06-14-05, 05:05 PM   #3
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Un'Touched has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 05:05 PM.
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Old 06-14-05, 05:21 PM   #4
Indeph
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From: Chicago, IL
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You will die if you weak,when you rhyme with me.
That's why your name blurred before death,just like the ring.
its cool,cause with you,I'm always awaitin surprises..
I mean who else,name theyself after the state of they privates.
september you joined,a loss is all its worth..
cause that month...only thing you celbrate is your fall from work
(fall arrives and labor day is all that happens in september)
you in the council?Nigga go and follow the exit.
you a fat woman pregnant,we have gotta be desperate.
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Old 06-14-05, 05:30 PM   #5
Un'Touched
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IP: B91A F28C

Waiting for you to say-some aint gotta turn to a "game" to "play-dumb"....
Lyrically dig ya grave-son threw all weak punches, how bout u save-some...
Small dick avoids "full-penertration", ya verse is a fools-demonstration...
Kids always "checking audios" he's clearly used to "oral-examination".....
Why you call-me-baby?, damn 1ndeph is hoping to pull-me-maybe...
I-win-daily you-a-maybe even with a “hose” you still couldn’t-spray-me...
Man it looks like you ignored "snoop" when he said "drop it like it hot"...
Hot-is-what-you-not in this battle you jus dropped-like-you-was-shot...
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Old 06-14-05, 05:34 PM   #6
Un'Touched
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IP: B91A F28C

Upping for votes haha Crew votes are allowed considering were in the same crew
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Old 06-14-05, 06:04 PM   #7
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Voted For: Un'Touched

ahhh this wuz a great match up i'd havta say that it wuz pretty equal xcept for un'touched's vocab and he had more multiz this wuz a good ass battle tho really short but ehhh
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Old 06-14-05, 06:29 PM   #8
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Voted For: 1ndeph

Waiting for you to say-some aint gotta turn to a "game" to "play-dumb"....
Lyrically dig ya grave-son threw all weak punches, how bout u save-some...
^^stretched n weak, lots of filler
Small dick avoids "full-penertration", ya verse is a fools-demonstration...
Kids always "checking audios" he's clearly used to "oral-examination".....
^^nope, lack of wit n complexity
Why you call-me-baby?, damn 1ndeph is hoping to pull-me-maybe...
I-win-daily you-a-maybe even with a “hose” you still couldn’t-spray-me...
^^better but still weak
Man it looks like you ignored "snoop" when he said "drop it like it hot"...
Hot-is-what-you-not in this battle you jus dropped-like-you-was-shot...
^^wack....wheres the wit?
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You will die if you weak,when you rhyme with me.
That's why your name blurred before death,just like the ring.
^^wasnt feelin it.
its cool,cause with you,I'm always awaitin surprises..
I mean who else,name theyself after the state of they privates.
^^dope personal n wording(connected)
september you joined,a loss is all its worth..
cause that month...only thing you celbrate is your fall from work
(fall arrives and labor day is all that happens in september)
^^decent
you in the council?Nigga go and follow the exit.
you a fat woman pregnant,we have gotta be desperate.
^^lol,.nah...
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indeph for having the single witty personal punch
that connected out of the entire duration of this battle
you both need to step it up n bring better more complex
concepts if you wanna get ya wins up......
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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Old 06-14-05, 06:46 PM   #9
Indeph
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From: Chicago, IL
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Daz you supposed to DR us.YOU FAGFACEHOESLUTNUT

People should know I can't take constructive critisism!!!!

fuck you daz lol

next!
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Old 06-14-05, 07:01 PM   #10
Un'Touched
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IP: B91A F28C

haha 1-1 uppin for some more votes
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Old 06-14-05, 11:40 PM   #11
Un'Touched
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uppin this shit................^^^^^^..............
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Old 06-15-05, 03:07 PM   #12
Un'Touched
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uppin for fuckin votes..................................
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Old 06-16-05, 03:43 PM   #13
Indeph
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damn its a voting madhouse!!! calm down with all the votes god damn!
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Old 06-16-05, 03:45 PM   #14
Un'Touched
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damn its a voting madhouse!!! calm down with all the votes god damn!



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Old 06-16-05, 11:25 PM   #15
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From: Harrisburg, PA
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Voted For: 1ndeph

Indeph- your verse was nice i thought...you had some good punches...they connected and hit nicely...Had some good personals also...structure was plain and simple easy to read n all dat...but overall 8.5/10.....cuz you had better punches and personals...

Untouched- your verse was nice too...but your punches were aight but some were weak..or didnt connect too well honestly...your structure was also plain and simple...easy to read n all...But also you really didnt have any personals...but overall 7.4/10.....you had decent punches...but some were just weak & you really didnt have any personals either...
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