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03-04-04, 11:34 AM | #1 | |||||||
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my culture been stalked by these spanish vultures/
poachers hunting us down like big game in this aztec town/ brown and proud, i'll suck da styles like a drout/ leaving you without a breath and bringin mouth to mouth lyrical inject/ been swaped like little bitty insects by these renissance pricks/ time to make dis time tick and tock; electrically vibrating shocks/ past and present reconnect with a funky dialect that i create / mean green is my state for yall who feel me to relate/ mexican up to date means you know the steez in these day to day basis/ its a crisis in my peoples surroundings; time to make a bounty/ between los angeles county, i feel the ancestors crying / who will testifying when all da crimes were left hidden inside a bee hive/ honey dipped jive i'm out bring da dead back to life/ |
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03-07-04, 11:40 PM | #2 | ||||
Word.
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IP: 522A 016B
I liked the topic idea man....seemed like a good idea to do something on....the content in this was alright...probably could have hit the topic better than what you did but it was still a nice read overall...keep at it.
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03-07-04, 11:48 PM | #3 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: B53A 1E53
i felt the flow man....i like ur style just add more content but keep doing ur shit...
peep mine too and tell me wut u think
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03-13-04, 03:01 PM | #4 | |||||||
Dont Push Me Of Regret It
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IP: 92E6 7769
i agree wid crez da topic was nice but kinda spoilt by the rhyme...vocab was ok but there was no flow and no mutipus....if u wont respect man u guna av to work for it...keep it up...
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