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02-21-04, 01:53 AM | #1 | ||||
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deadly lyricist
IP: 3E94 B418
i'm a take out your eyes and swallow them so you can see that i'm ill,
emcees betta believe that i kill. i'm as untouchable as eminem and dre, bring your crew and i'll blast ten in them today, best emcee to date, rappaz i disinflate. i strangle rappaz till they eyes fall out, ain't stoppin till wormz get inside and they start to crawl out. i'm the devil in disguise, ya'll neva seen an emcee this wise. that can send fiends to the sky. i take out emcee's teeth like if they just took a trip to the dentist, you can neva dent this, beat rappaz relentless, dope is what the scent is. usin ruthless metaphors, leave rappaz toothless while some i pounded on till they head get sore. i'm packed wit weapons like a soldier at war, just came out so which means i' m raw, shrp lyriccs cut you like saw. usin incrdible syllables, i'm sick, i'm also the illest yo, if my enemy ain't deceased then i;m a kill his bro. |
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02-21-04, 03:48 PM | #2 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 80EF 45DD
gay as fuck
no vocab keep droppin though |
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02-21-04, 06:59 PM | #3 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 6387 1717
will a peer" dawg I'd like to see some of your shit. Cause I think you talk to damn much
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02-21-04, 08:38 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 04E0 7BDA
Deadly lyricist, Illizit say like your sentences//
and of course like thoughs metaphores// "i take out emcee's teeth like if they just took a trip to the dentist, you can neva dent this, beat rappaz relentless, dope is what the scent is." These lines got me smillin untill next time keep it grindin.
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02-22-04, 02:56 PM | #5 | ||||
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ambition and illizit thanks for your props.
IP: 3E94 B418
ambition your dope as fuck, and illizit i haven't read some of your shit yet but im a try to. that goes to "will a peer" damn dawg you talk too much shit
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02-22-04, 03:10 PM | #6 | ||||||
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im new too
IP: 072B 152E
noone can define my skills
im like a cross between a bottle of vodka n 3 bottles o pills... yo.. my minds hazin im pagein' agein' caucasions to see if they find my shit amazin. its a maze in here, im lost in ma mind an i cant get out, but fuck it, i dont mind. im kinda like the things ya find unda ya dads bed - the tied up men wi bags ova their damn head dead like the day they were born, i mean alive i thrive on the thoughts of havin 2 wives. ma heads cavin the mothafucka jus caved in n collapsed up all wi ma brain in an now im ravin, so watch ya back - i got HIV n im hooked on smack n i got a dirty needle, headin 4 ya arm because im evil, causin ya'll harm I NEED TO BE KILLED!!! SKAM Big up... phew, epha, pose, omega one, jist, chap, gents, task... keep it goin boys... |
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02-22-04, 07:49 PM | #7 | ||||
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IP: 3E94 B418
thats cool could've used better vocab yho. still dope. keep droppin
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02-23-04, 01:04 PM | #8 | ||||||
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some of its a bit sketchy i know. ' i thrive...' that line was shit. so is ' i dont mind...'
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03-05-04, 08:01 PM | #9 | ||||
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IP: 75CE A0E1
gimme some feed back
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03-08-04, 06:05 PM | #10 | ||||
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IP: 75CE A0E1
feedback plz
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03-16-04, 09:23 AM | #11 | |||||||
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IP: 03C2 3387
That was some good shit, man. That dentist line was a good one. Good use of metaphors too. Keep it up!
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03-16-04, 04:32 PM | #12 | ||||||
This is my first post!
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IP: 4989 4793
Man that sucked demolish check it
Man Fuck Profecy, Your ass wotn even battle me// And believe me, Your scared, Your ass is wack, and you trying to decieve me// So they callin you the fuckin greatest// Well bitch ill battle any motherfucker, Im the Fuckin bravest// Your ass needs to leave and go back to listenin to sublime// That shit aint as hardcore as my motherfuckin rhymes// You run like no bitch man you aint got shit to look out for// Look out for me bitch so when you do see me you can shout whore// I cant even hear your shit cause its to much of a fuckin bore// bitch if you dont battle me// ima fuckin declare war// |
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03-17-04, 07:50 PM | #13 | ||||
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IP: 75CE A0E1
ayo pimpinmike trust me dawg you dont wanna step to this.
this just muthafuckin freestyle, but if ya really want beef call me out on bitch slapped you fuckin pussy |
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