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Old 03-17-04, 03:46 PM   #1
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some new shit

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when i drop it try in stop it, im tight like a knot bitch
im ill like a disease makin your nob itch,
im the walkin dead targeting the feds,eat the brains out there heads,
now i got an immortal clan, undead army, try n disarm youll be gettin embalmed b.
heres the situation you facing, im real n your an imitation,
im losing my patience the occasion cummin,try runnin i stay gunnin,
clappin at your mens got your ends on a curfew
many stepped up,tryed, but never made it through
do i have to illustrate this shit with a picture,
samurai spirit hit ya to the face now you had a real taste,
im lion hearted,like moses the seas parted
an i aint even started.
your the one that put yourself in the place,impenetrable outa case,
thats cause you light n im a heavyweight, this your biggest mistake
ther aint no point in tyring to resuscitate the kid
i drowned him in my shit
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Old 03-19-04, 04:57 AM   #2
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7/10 - Good VOCABULARY
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Razer Vs Dagreatest

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Tha*Reign*Man Vs Razer (0-5)
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guyver4mk Vs Razer (0-3): (Gave Up)
Da Greatest Vs Razer (0-5)

4 Wins, 3 Knockouts, 1 Loss.
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Old 03-20-04, 03:57 PM   #3
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needin more feedback
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Old 03-21-04, 03:38 PM   #4
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uppin.............
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Old 03-21-04, 03:47 PM   #5
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that's pretty good. I agree wit Razer, that was really good vocab usage. In a few parts, it was hard to feel the flo, but other than that, it was really good. Keep droppin'.

Also, could u check out my "my story" freestyle in Open Mic? thanks.
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Old 03-22-04, 04:47 AM   #6
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I thought it was pretty good keep elevating

one love.......
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