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03-27-04, 11:08 PM | #1 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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Just some shit I layed out
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*Yo, on the real a nigga's just trying to improve his skills, so let me know how really feel about my shit, Holla at cha boy!*
Unrehearsed, emurshed in rymes/ that at any given time can depurse & morph into flows/ who knows how far this will go/ maybe its my time to blow/ Cause I'm unique, never bleak/ ryhme strong never weak/ I'm a tell you like rakim did " don't sweat the technique"/ All I need is a track to match my intensity/ purpensity for flowin' like water/ anyone sound like me kinda sorta/ but you can't place one cause I'm unplaceable/ when I get my shine I'll be unreplaceable/ my flows are contagious/ they can't be contained they flow off these pages/ I'm the new sensation cause crowd's elation/ its conceivible that I'll touch the whole nation/ I'm hotter than hot don't spit fire but UV-rays/ born sicker than sick gettin' better wit' each passin' day/ So if you hate on me you just hatin' yourself/ cause when no one's lookin' you blastin' me in stealh/ Listen up and listen closely/ cause those be ryhmes that go for nothin' less than top dollar/ thats why I can afford to pop my collar/ everybody knows I spit my shit proper/ If you got problems/ I'm a solve'em/ you can take my music and use it/ its considered theraputic/ if it was food it'd be delicious/ and at the same time nutristous/FDA approved untouchable's a understatement/ I walk the path of the righteous careful of the wet pavement// |
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03-27-04, 11:39 PM | #2 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: E097 F57E
a bro nice work, u had a few good punch lines, u have improved from ur last battles, keep that shyt up
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03-28-04, 12:28 AM | #3 | ||||
....Trunks R 4 Bodies....
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IP: 0ABC 464B
Thought you had some good punches.......
good shit...... one love...... |
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03-28-04, 03:13 AM | #4 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 525D FF37
good vocab and multis work on the flow though it stuck in a couple of places
keep droppin
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