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03-28-04, 08:23 AM
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New to RB
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Newest Verse !!!! Suggestions?
IP: E034 DBC6
There is no end to this - no end at all /I've seen the visions, I've heard the call /The fires, they cursed in-sissons/ Its all fun n games till a lame ass gets hurt/
In my memory this fire burns / bleed for me / The day I return The mind is black, this soul is free you have nothing agaist me / This isent the real person u see/ its the devil at work The evil you fear is the anger i weave/ Impending doom, infecting the masses to decive all human beings/ To achive the greatest victory ill leave every g in a trash can/ Im not rappin bout attacking you but i am laghing at your music/ (haha) Grasp your self hold your emotions back for u light my fuse n loose it on every dude who gets rude/ Ill sickem like im the flu better belive this bitch/ Im commin to get you |
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03-28-04, 03:06 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 525D FF37
good topic
good flow work on vocab though 8/10
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03-28-04, 03:17 PM
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....Trunks R 4 Bodies....
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IP: 0ABC 464B
I liked it it was pretty good....
good topic dog....... hot shit..... one love...... |
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03-28-04, 09:12 PM
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New to RB
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IP: E034 DBC6
Thanks this is kinda my rebound any more comments / suggestions?
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03-29-04, 05:49 PM
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New to RB
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IP: E034 DBC6
Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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03-29-04, 09:29 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
yo it'z good i have to give you that! jus' when you write next time and your writing a song don't do it in battle form use the texture
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so what chicks can rap too/ u won't battle me cause i can beat u/ |
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