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Check in by: 09-12-04 at 01:08 PM

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Tha Phoenix has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 01:13 PM.

DRAG~ON has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 01:14 PM.

I’ve got this kid losin fast, his chances have already gone bleak
Scheme already told you, your not creative kinda weak
If I gave you a steroid you still couldn’t punch hard
Its like your too crap at science, you can never get the meth-od
Ya chances are like dynamite with a thread, and kid you just blew it
Yeah that name is cool…
… Back when Ruff Ryders used it!
damn prudent, u just stole a name.. i bet i'll watch this fake edit
...cuz like visa theft... he always trys to take the credit...
You da flamethrower? Man look at the size of ya head
You talk out ya ass soo much I smell shit on ya breath
Matter of fact, you talk pretty like you wearin perfume, methanol
This bitch couldn’t spit fire if his rhymes were made out of ethanol
You frontin when you accepted this battle, I got this bitch schooled
I don’t even do drugs and I’ma still smoke this fool
Ya like a tool, always should be kept in tha basement
And if we lose ya, then we can always find a replacement
Ya might as well face it, you can’t win, go back and get a pencil
Take a stencil, write until something dope hits you
Until you do, you might as well leave, everyone dissed you
Take a break, it don’t matter, we like ya family nobodies gonna miss you
I got ya shit broke… like the crust of ya mantle
You should have known, Tha Phoenix is too hot to handle!

u think u hot as a PHOENIX but u colder dan anti-freeze
asthmatic wheeze.... u don't spit sik just cuz u sneeze

tryna take my flame dat burn enternal.... fuck da inferno
i leave ya mind twisted like tornados 2 Ketchup like Tomatoes

Plato wouldn't have a poem or scripture 2 picture ur verse
it got no flavor so ima merk u n leave cinnamon in ya hearse

u fuckin X-MAN fanatic get astatic my murder is drastic 1
gettin laid off im in playoffs .... u askin paper or plastic

think u lasted u been ran threw ur vision is like a tunnel
so i blast diss hoe CAKE wit more holes den a FUNNEL 2

how i treat is how i eat u carnivore on da mic i luv beef
if i was a STREET u couldn't BEAT wit all ya Breakin n Poppin 3

1. Tha Phoenix is a character off of X-MAN
2. Funnel Cake's have holes in em
3. Beat Street was a Break dancin movin

Fairly wack verse man. Uppin for votes...........

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Ppl merked as of late:

X NaughtyBoy X got his ass handed back to him by tha phoenix, September 2k4

Yo Can Someone Vote On This Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!11

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X NaughtyBoy X got his ass handed back to him by tha phoenix, September 2k4

What Is With People Looking At Something 100 Times And Not Posting A Verse, Vote Goddamnit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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X NaughtyBoy X got his ass handed back to him by tha phoenix, September 2k4

umm, decent battle for this site i guess =/

punches- drag-on (phoenix had simple ones)
personals- i guess drag, coz of the name play in first line =/
werdplay- drag-on

drop honest vote here- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148270
flow- tie..
multis- none had any
complex- drag-on..
vote- drag..

phoenix- good try, but try to add metaphores and similes to yer verse so then it makes the punches hit harder, i've seen this problem alot on this site, but its an easy thing to overcome..
f.e.- i'mma leave ya underground (on-the-ground) like an immortal technique album..

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WTF, I clearly won this. Uppin.

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Ppl merked as of late:

X NaughtyBoy X got his ass handed back to him by tha phoenix, September 2k4

yo we uppin 4 sum honest votes ya
we will return da favor

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OPEN BATTLES
DRAG~ON VS Tha Phoenix
DRAG~ON VS BOSTONLYRICIST(Rematch)
DRAG~ON VS INSANE16

Voted For: Tha Phoenix

Im Votin For Phoenix, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, But Pho Came A Little Harder With His Punches Tho...

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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7 Day Theory

Yo Uppin This Shit, Don't Sleep On This People!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: Tha Phoenix

Don't know who the Phoenix is but i smell a merkage here!

openers:TP... had a personal thrown in there
D-O... kinda weak...maybe if it was worded differently it woulda hit harder


meta's: ehhh... nothing worth mentioning from either one

multi's: D-O... limited usage but they were there
TP... none used

personals:TP... personals were hitting in the beginning then it was just straight dissin after that
D-O... no personals at all

punches:TP... hit a lot harder and was more consistant

vocab: TP... better vocab all around... nice usage
D-O... work on it... some good ideas but ya need to get ya point across better

structure and flow: tie

ok battle... good job PT