aight heres the rules
house rules basically
no d/r
crew votes
blind spit in 15 min after check in
10-15 lines

yo killa check in man...i dont have all day.......

ok lets go................................................ .............

aight checkin in..................................

kid you only think you're big, it's hot gas you cyphon//
but your tanks on "E" i swollow you whole like a python//
you fuckin rat, you get capped with your own raps//
you be beggin CP for help when your backbone snaps//
wack azz cat speakin on all his guns//
you ain't developed yet just like a small kids nuts//
they aint hung, but you will be by your fuckin feet//
let the blood rush to your head untill your eyeballs leak//
your punches lack somethin, like trees without leaves//
you're simply out of season, not even to mention my league//
go back to the minors, come back when you gotten hotter//
even then i dont guarantee you be near me, ill be walkin on water//
i kick you in ya clit just for havin a pussy and tryin to diss me///
have you screamin "I'm not a girl" onstage singin next to britany//

beat u , its oh so simple/
grabe u by ur head and pop u like a pimple/
my lifes real fucked up , i wouldn't excpect u to know/
got people turning their backs on me like johny deep in blow/
well what do u know im battlin another schmuck/
suck, fuck, luck, duck/ those all rhyme, dont htey puck/
im done im going home yo/
u can come over later and suck my dick homo/

yo can we get some votes on this shit...we newbs need some winz too ya know

a vote is a vote a boat is a boat a moat is a moat//////// I want a 0-10 record

I know how it feels to put a verse and no one votes. Anyway...

Tenken - your structure was good and you had better wordplay and better punches though they weren't too strong.

Gb- you show no effort at all in this maybe your jsut a bit lazy in battles.

Overall i vote for Tenken

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118298

tenken u had nice structure flowed good nice wordplay some punchz an personalz none really hit that hard either though


gb u had ok structure started off better but fell off way to much at the end had more multiz and good punchz at first but waznt consistent

vote/tenken

hit up these

ghost vs threatz
ghost vs gkillaz

1

yo, imma do this ezs style aight.

v/teflon (opponent spit 8 lines)

hit this up
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118285
lol

my vote is for tenk, not much to explain .. G were you even tryin?.. good flow tenk and nice punches.. GB if your serious about this go read how to flow and make punches bud.

hit these up please:
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...03&page=3&pp=15
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118165
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118312

why do people come and look but dont vote while there here....its 50 views and 11 replies...whats the reason?

ok breakdown
opener - T
flow - T
punches - T
wordplay - T
closer - T
Enjoyment - T

Ok ur first 2 lines beat him.....G u need to either elevate ALOT or stop fuckin round........easy win for Tenken....T u forgot to poll ur vote in my battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118305

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