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04-26-04, 01:59 PM | #1 | |||||
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Whats On My Mind
IP: C348 5CFF
This is just another lil elevation I did for a min...holla back
My mentals are tipsy and widely overdriven… But my tongue’s decision is to spit knowledge like its street religion I’m dedicated to defy my pearl on Earth without getting sacked up and zippined’ The world is forever hungry and don’t give a damn about supportin’ my livin’ The breath of life plus reality equals testified truth… And look what materialism has envisoned in our youth Workin to be heartfelt, love ourself and fathom our wealth Is more important than you ridin on others safety belts Some of us cum laude’s, degrees, GED’s…not all quite terrific But putting mentals in depth…can equally design ya to be scientific Industry chickens flock thru wit ghostwrittens and furry mittens While us “In da streets” chicks tryna survive in hazardous conditions Just shows you how much we being respected in such a religion Dedicated and created to be more than just man’s divison Besides that I’m steadily seekin my insightful missions Not to be stuck in the kitchen and makin others decisions It’s a Ghetto Philanthrophy surroundin and houndin me Expactations pitched forward to my world exclusively I’m all alone in this struggle doing whatever it takes Haters keep pushin my shine while I’m coppin’ the cake |
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04-26-04, 03:47 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 4289 77F4
yo this was a bad ass verse overall. nice wordplay, tite flow, nice vocab woulda liked more metas but outta 10 i give u a 9.
Holla Back At Mine I AM THE AMERICAN DREAM BLOOD, SWEAT, and TEARS
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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04-26-04, 06:39 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 2174 EDD6
this is good
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04-26-04, 06:41 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 2174 EDD6
thanx
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04-27-04, 12:12 AM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: DAA3 2944
u a good rapper u keep it up
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04-27-04, 12:38 AM | #6 | |||||
The Topical Juggernaut
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IP: C531 1B40
Liked the emotion, Toss in a few more Multies. Vocab was good, Wordplay was ok...
Over all nice peice Keep droppin Cat, Peace.
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Crhyme Sindicate The unexamined life is not worth living.
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05-13-04, 01:26 AM | #7 | |||||
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IP: EC0B 84C7
thanx...uppin for more feedback
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