RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > The Cage > Battle Archives > Front Lines Battles
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
$$$tim$$$ 0 0%
streetsweepa 5 100.00%
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 04-14-04, 09:49 PM   #1
streetsweepa
Banned: Cheating
 
streetsweepa's Avatar
 
From: detroit
streetsweepa vrs. $$$tim$$$

IP: AAF4 20CB

8 lin min
no d/r
no crew votes
bitches go first
Send a message via AIM to streetsweepa  
Old 04-14-04, 09:50 PM   #2
streetsweepa
Banned: Cheating
 
streetsweepa's Avatar
 
From: detroit
IP: AAF4 20CB

Quote:
Originally Posted by streetsweepa
8 lin min
no d/r
no crew votes
bitches go first

im goin to pick up some stuff for my mom u spit first ill bbl later
good luck
Send a message via AIM to streetsweepa  
Old 04-14-04, 09:52 PM   #3
$$$tim$$$
Banned: Cheating
 
IP: AAF4 20CB

im checkin in .........this nigga dont gotta chance ......
 
Old 04-14-04, 09:56 PM   #4
In-Vision
Out-Spoken
 
In-Vision's Avatar
 
From: memphis
IP: AF76 A123

__________________
Seek & Destroy
We have fun in my basement
Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.


"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox


The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
Send a message via AIM to In-Vision Send a message via MSN to In-Vision Send a message via Yahoo to In-Vision  
Old 04-14-04, 10:02 PM   #5
$$$tim$$$
Banned: Cheating
 
IP: AAF4 20CB

who diss nigga dats wants to ryhme like me?//
ill fill thiss niga wit slugs and leave him with an ivy//
doctors tryin to save but his heart wont beat!!!!!.......yea thiss nigga is here juss to die on the streets
yea who would kno u would have went to and had your ass kicked...now ya momma has to pay for another casket!!!!
have ya boys drive up where the shots wherr fired at ...leave ya blood stain next to the slugs that where fired at
look this nigga coughing he cant breathe...he prasein god please HELP ME!!!
no no no he aint gettin no response back ..u already cheated death once ..muh mutha fuckin gat packed a punch!!!!
everybody hears words..but the words dont mean shit.....everybody knos that this nigga cant spit !!!!!
heheh nigga try to finish that one off !!!!!
 
Old 04-14-04, 10:08 PM   #6
streetsweepa
Banned: Cheating
 
streetsweepa's Avatar
 
From: detroit
IP: AAF4 20CB

Quote:
Originally Posted by $$$tim$$$
who diss nigga dats wants to ryhme like me?//
ill fill thiss niga wit slugs and leave him with an ivy//
doctors tryin to save but his heart wont beat!!!!!.......yea thiss nigga is here juss to die on the streets
yea who would kno u would have went to and had your ass kicked...now ya momma has to pay for another casket!!!!
have ya boys drive up where the shots wherr fired at ...leave ya blood stain next to the slugs that where fired at
look this nigga coughing he cant breathe...he prasein god please HELP ME!!!
no no no he aint gettin no response back ..u already cheated death once ..muh mutha fuckin gat packed a punch!!!!
everybody hears words..but the words dont mean shit.....everybody knos that this nigga cant spit !!!!!
heheh nigga try to finish that one off !!!!!

alright im back and ready wtf ur llready offline? ok ill spit neway
Send a message via AIM to streetsweepa  
Old 04-14-04, 10:18 PM   #7
streetsweepa
Banned: Cheating
 
streetsweepa's Avatar
 
From: detroit
IP: AAF4 20CB

u say i try to ryme like u//
come on nigga u shyt is wack and u kno thats true//
u wanted to battle me? ur weak u should have thought that through//
come on bitch your worse than u crew//
ur punches are soft and dont connect//
next time you battle atleast give it good intellect//
u talk shit but ur wak ill teach u some respect//
we all kno ur punches are soft and dont take effect//
u act like ur shit was hard and u i had some thing to fear//
man u should sing country music cuz you dont belong here//
Send a message via AIM to streetsweepa  
Old 04-14-04, 10:24 PM   #8
franchiZe
Created New Account
 
franchiZe's Avatar
 
From: from da U.K.
IP: AA4B 9F63

both average spits that have room for improvement
both had good flow and structure

what streetsweepa lacked on originality he made up for with punches
that finish was gud also that earns u some points
$$$tim$$$ u was average wiv some good punches but u also lacked originality so my vote just swings tha way of streetsweepa

vote on these so i can free up a spot playas:

franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374
franchiZe 0-1 Shadows edge
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
franchiZe 0-0 Ghost354
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335
 
Old 04-14-04, 10:24 PM   #9
Restricted
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
Restricted's Avatar
 
From: Pittsburgh, PA
IP: 5E88 DE69

Aight Check Dis..


$$$tim$$$: 3/10
I Dunno What You Were Spitting, But Your Structure Was Horrible. You Were Doing More Of A Topical Than A Battle. No Punches In Your Whole Spit. Flow Was Off....and Since No Punches That Means No Meta's and Multis. Just Elevate and Remember When Battling Use "Battling" Structure and USE PUNCHES!! Just Elevate Pimpin.

StreetSweepa: 5/10
Your Flow Was Nice, Definitly Towards The End. Not Really and Metaphors and Multiples But Atleast You Had Punches. Sum Definitly Hit Hard While Sum Didn't. Just Elevate On Word Usuage and Metaphors. Creativity Also Helps. Just Elevate and Stay Dope.

Vote - StreetSweepa

*Best Line*

u talk shit but ur wak ill teach u some respect//
we all kno ur punches are soft and dont take effect//

^Syck Flow and Punch^

 
Old 04-14-04, 11:00 PM   #10
Diagnose
Suspended: Biting
 
From: Daly City, California
IP: 2208 FC10

spit: street
punch:street
thought into it: street

stim..your rhymes were alright..but ur newb so i'll give u a break...ur punch isn't good at all..and had no multi's..alright..so just keep spittin..you'll elevate sooner or later
 
Old 04-15-04, 12:03 AM   #11
streetsweepa
Banned: Cheating
 
streetsweepa's Avatar
 
From: detroit
IP: AAF4 20CB

come on come on uppin for votes oh yea $$$ tim $$$ that wasnt bad for ur first battle but u didnt throw any punches u need to throw punches cant win with out them holla back
Send a message via AIM to streetsweepa  
Old 04-15-04, 12:43 AM   #12
Ricochet1
New to RB
 
IP: 7DF2 2CFE

I felt tim's was fake... I mean.. slugs..... death.. bleh.. BORING.. wut u just listen to the 50 cent cd? fuckkkkk .... anyways it was fake.. NO punches at all.. dont just diss.. punch..as for sweepa's well. he gets my vote cuz I aint feelin the whole fake shit from tim.. and second cuz he flipped a few things on tim..
like this line.. "next time you battle atleast give it good intellect//" liked that cuz is true....

both had good flow and structure

but.. street sweepa won easily

peace
 
Old 04-15-04, 01:01 AM   #13
Da Solution
Banned: Cheating
 
Da Solution's Avatar
 
From: Chi-Town
IP: 3240 794D

Street sweooer take this cuz he had better everything/Good battle to both bt sweeper cmae harder

Vote on this please Da Solution vs. Spitfire
 
 


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 12:49 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.