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Demobx 0 0%
DeNounced 5 100.00%
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Old 04-19-04, 05:53 PM   #1
DeNounced
Flyweight
 
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From: Sacramento...
Demobx-Vs-DeNounced

IP: BB67 205B

Aight...

10-16 lines

no crew/dr/hate votes...

check in...

drop your verse...
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then the name De' appears and queers start sheddin tears...
catchin peers,man's sweatin of shear fear...
when i interfere,im closer than i may appear like rearview mirrors...
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Old 04-19-04, 06:29 PM   #2
demobx
Flyweight
 
From: boogie down bronx
IP: 3FAB 2777

You can neva eva fuck wit a bitch like me got u wobbling fucking up ure symetry,
with third degree burns cause i lyrically cause u to burn nows its ure turn to throw ure rhymes in a yearn
u set the terms and i killed them like a villian
ive renounced your denounced establishment like ive killed ya -and overthrown your possibilities of enhancement,
better off going to a beauty pageant cause ure silence is the way to get a fragment of success
u fuckin wit nothing but the best whos only interest is to leave you sleepless in yo' bed d-e-m-o tatood on your head
like the three sixes come with artillery equipment
and a new shipment comes into effect when any motherfucka tries to disrespect
become my pet rock and stay in your position now u ask for permission like im your girl and im pussy wippen
got u trippen over my lines and im a gemini double the blows shooting up your spine l
ike an epideral u running slow like a turtle
tightening up your gurdle till ya choke even when u swimmin got u doing the breast stroke
just to see if coming taking prozack cause i got u buggin
u nothin but lightweight im a venoumous snake ready to swallow u whole but u might make my belly ache
from ure rusty ruins your nothin but a dusty student whos losing to THIS bitch DEMO FROM THE BRONX WHO DONT GIVE A SHIT
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Old 04-19-04, 06:42 PM   #3
DeNounced
Flyweight
 
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From: Sacramento...
IP: BB67 205B

Aye ..that was some good shit...ill drop in a bit...
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im gone for 3 centurys 2 decades and five years...
then the name De' appears and queers start sheddin tears...
catchin peers,man's sweatin of shear fear...
when i interfere,im closer than i may appear like rearview mirrors...
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Old 04-19-04, 06:58 PM   #4
DeNounced
Flyweight
 
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From: Sacramento...
IP: BB67 205B

Ill leave this wanna be 'wrapper' out on the ground like i was a fat kid on halloween-
Your punches cant-be-seen,and beatin-me aint gonna happen like oj never fled from the scene-
Think your hard kid in your division your runnin with-queens-
Leave this kid obscene,while i spit clean,you need a little help with the 'slickness' going through tubes of vaseline-
If i slowed the-beat this kid aint catchin-me,ill 'split' ya 'personalitys' like this kids name was kid cassidy-
Your raps are like shakespear cause this cat only spits-in-tradgedys,and everything you write should be considred as blasphemy-
Ooops sorry i already got you on vocabulary,know me as scary,what are you like 12 kid?..where-the-hair-be?-
If i was tinkerbell your still more fairy,leave this kid in 'rotten clumps' like he was bad dairy-
Dropped the full sixteen kid i just ripped you in less than ten-
And when this battles over id be more than happy to sodimize you again-

Damn...lmao...lets see the votes...
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im gone for 3 centurys 2 decades and five years...
then the name De' appears and queers start sheddin tears...
catchin peers,man's sweatin of shear fear...
when i interfere,im closer than i may appear like rearview mirrors...
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Old 04-19-04, 07:05 PM   #5
demobx
Flyweight
 
From: boogie down bronx
IP: 3FAB 2777

Quote:
Originally Posted by DeNounced
Ill leave this wanna be 'wrapper' out on the ground like i was a fat kid on halloween-
Your punches cant-be-seen,and beatin-me aint gonna happen like oj never fled from the scene-
Think your hard kid in your division your runnin with-queens-
Leave this kid obscene,while i spit clean,you need a little help with the 'slickness' going through tubes of vaseline-
If i slowed the-beat this kid aint catchin-me,ill 'split' ya 'personalitys' like this kids name was kid cassidy-
Your raps are like shakespear cause this cat only spits-in-tradgedys,and everything you write should be considred as blasphemy-
Ooops sorry i already got you on vocabulary,know me as scary,what are you like 12 kid?..where-the-hair-be?-
If i was tinkerbell your still more fairy,leave this kid in 'rotten clumps' like he was bad dairy-
Dropped the full sixteen kid i just ripped you in less than ten-
And when this battles over id be more than happy to sodimize you again-

Damn...lmao...lets see the votes...
THAT WAS HOT I GIVE YOU YOUR PROPS LETS SEE WHOS THE BEST WHEN THE VOTES DROP
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Old 04-19-04, 07:07 PM   #6
DeNounced
Flyweight
 
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From: Sacramento...
IP: BB67 205B

Thanks pimpin..not a bad verse yourself....

lets get some votes....
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im gone for 3 centurys 2 decades and five years...
then the name De' appears and queers start sheddin tears...
catchin peers,man's sweatin of shear fear...
when i interfere,im closer than i may appear like rearview mirrors...
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Old 04-19-04, 08:26 PM   #7
Wulf
New to RB
 
IP: D280 BCD2

Man i gotta break from my normal format and just say DAMNN!!!!!! this vote will not say why De shoulda won but this vote will help DEMO up his skill demo try and make your lines the same lengh, and try to make them rhyme..when you write your verse try sayin it out loud and see if it flows and make your punchlines hurt and not i'm talkin about yo mama jokes...keep battlein and up yourself

Ill leave this wanna be 'wrapper' out on the ground like i was a fat kid on halloween-
Your punches cant-be-seen,and beatin-me aint gonna happen like oj never fled from the scene-

^heh, sounds like 50s fat kid line.....kinda

Your raps are like shakespear cause this cat only spits-in-tradgedys,and everything you write should be considred as blasphemy-
Ooops sorry i already got you on vocabulary,know me as scary,what are you like 12 kid?..where-the-hair-be?-

^clever
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Old 04-19-04, 08:44 PM   #8
GKillaz05
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From: CANADA
IP: 6A9B BA66

sorry I forgot to return the fav, my vote goes to De for better flow and better multis and some hard hittin punches...dam your shit was iight... your lines were a lil un-even and some of your lines didnt ryme work on that stuff and you'll get better.



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Old 04-19-04, 08:54 PM   #9
DeNounced
Flyweight
 
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From: Sacramento...
IP: BB67 205B

^no problemo g...thanks man..and uppin.................
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im gone for 3 centurys 2 decades and five years...
then the name De' appears and queers start sheddin tears...
catchin peers,man's sweatin of shear fear...
when i interfere,im closer than i may appear like rearview mirrors...
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Old 04-19-04, 09:14 PM   #10
iamthatdude87
Addicted
 
IP: 39F3 9E90

overall this batttle was cool both cool but denounced did almost everything a little bit better then demo..demo u need to elevate and maybe then u could of won .. other than that no hate..my vote goes to denouced

drop an honest vote on ecko vs shadowsedge
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119917
 
Old 04-20-04, 01:13 AM   #11
DeNounced
Flyweight
 
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From: Sacramento...
IP: EC0B 84C7

come on folks ...only need 2 votes here..why is it so hard to get votes????...votes please...come on its not hard...
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im gone for 3 centurys 2 decades and five years...
then the name De' appears and queers start sheddin tears...
catchin peers,man's sweatin of shear fear...
when i interfere,im closer than i may appear like rearview mirrors...
Send a message via AIM to DeNounced  
Old 04-20-04, 01:15 AM   #12
puertoricanelly
Rb's Teacher
 
From: KILLAFORNIA
IP: 3240 794D

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1237919

wat up yall click the link above and hook a brotha up wit some votes
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Old 04-20-04, 01:19 AM   #13
Shadows edge
retired.
 
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From: Urbana
IP: 75F5 BDD1

Vote on either of the battles in my sig and drop a link, I will give an honest vote on this battle.
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Old 04-20-04, 01:19 AM   #14
DeNounced
Flyweight
 
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From: Sacramento...
IP: EC0B 84C7

^this gets annoying...i need votes here..your links dont help..lmao...
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im gone for 3 centurys 2 decades and five years...
then the name De' appears and queers start sheddin tears...
catchin peers,man's sweatin of shear fear...
when i interfere,im closer than i may appear like rearview mirrors...
Send a message via AIM to DeNounced  
Old 04-20-04, 01:25 AM   #15
DeNounced
Flyweight
 
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From: Sacramento...
IP: EC0B 84C7

Shadow...i dropped a vote pimpin...drop an honest vote here if you could...thanks...
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im gone for 3 centurys 2 decades and five years...
then the name De' appears and queers start sheddin tears...
catchin peers,man's sweatin of shear fear...
when i interfere,im closer than i may appear like rearview mirrors...
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