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View Poll Results: MM wins
MARVOLoUsJ1009 5 83.33%
Murderous Mask 1 16.67%
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Old 04-22-04, 07:08 PM   #1
Enhance
Seriously , I'm i`ll man.
 
MM Vs MARVOLoUsJ1009

IP: 3240 794D

MM vs this guy
you know the rules.
Drop your verse nucca.
 
Old 04-22-04, 07:16 PM   #2
MARVOLoUsJ1009
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
 
From: NyC,Da HOMe OF Da TWiN TOWER'S!
IP: 8764 0826

jea..

u pussy dunny i'll show up 2 ya block with beretta's & mags //
i could see u "nuts" so when i clap ima leave "m(&)m" in a "bag" //[get it]
i dont even gota ball-2-fist...but i heard about u dogg-u-bitch //
if everybody caught a "cold" & "dialed ya number" they wouldn't "call-u-sick" //
y rap when u aint even shippin-gold,trust me i aint gon reach 4 my hip n fold //
go head talk shit dunny keep commin "out ya face" like "pipen's nose" //
ima come 2 ya crib and put "metal on ya'll pussy's" like "stripper poles" //
ya girl told me u aint gota "sex-drive" so u just put ya "dick in ya hand" and hit da "road" //
u say ya lines is dope?..nope u neva stood on da block grindin coke //
i know where u live dogg u like "Weed" u not hard da find and "smoke" //

10 lines.....spit back dunny
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Old 04-22-04, 07:18 PM   #3
Enhance
Seriously , I'm i`ll man.
 
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Marv why are you battling me , bitch I will hold ya exsistance
& if you steel my style , I`ll knock more times than jehova witness
I told ya you’re the shittest , words of wisdom will keep you on hold.
Then Erase your name on RB , like im cprogress or strobe
Battling me ?…. nah…. stop fronting it`s gay...
How can you battle me…when your to busy running away
You suck more than a vacuum , & I`ll run the highest lesson bitch
He doesn’t rap , no he`s to busy sending 21 private messages. (21 questions)
Look at this kid upping his posts I wont boar..but dude its over..
… you aint no dangerous weapon , dawg your more like a supersoaker!
 
Old 04-22-04, 07:22 PM   #4
quickpunch
Suspended: Biting
 
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can yall vote on this battle

quickpunch vs gkillaz05...we'll come back and vote on this after uve both voted on our shit...thanks..pce
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Old 04-22-04, 08:20 PM   #5
MARVOLoUsJ1009
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
 
From: NyC,Da HOMe OF Da TWiN TOWER'S!
IP: 8764 0826

dog y u cant just vote n now............................
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Old 04-22-04, 08:30 PM   #6
B_Loco
I Aint Playin Witcha
 
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From: Steel City
IP: DFB7 75F3

Punches: MARV....killed em wit this=y rap when u aint even shippin-gold,trust me i aint gon reach 4 my hip n fold //
go head talk shit dunny keep commin "out ya face" like "pipen's nose" //
ima come 2 ya crib and put "metal on ya'll pussy's" like "stripper poles" //"... lol thats all he needed for this one

Vocab: None..both spittaz need to work on that
Multis: MARV...he had multis that were good,while the utha guy had none
Personals-none
Structure: Both emcees had good readable structure
Flow: *note there is flow in text as long as u know how to read and rhyme...and i feel both yall had good flow

v/MARV nice shyt yo
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Old 04-22-04, 08:30 PM   #7
B_Loco
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From: Steel City
IP: DFB7 75F3

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Old 04-22-04, 11:04 PM   #8
E Looch
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check it

punchs-j easily stayed consistant with them 2 that opener was tight and so was this
go head talk shit dunny keep commin "out ya face" like "pipen's nose" //
ima come 2 ya crib and put "metal on ya'll pussy's" like "stripper poles" //

personals- marv got it easily with that opener shit had me crackin up

multies marv got this to didnt see multies in mm flow both could use more multies

good battle
vote marvolous
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Old 04-22-04, 11:14 PM   #9
MARVOLoUsJ1009
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
 
From: NyC,Da HOMe OF Da TWiN TOWER'S!
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im up 2-0.........any more votes...drop ya links i'll return da favor
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Old 04-22-04, 11:44 PM   #10
XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
huh~!
 
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From: newyork/B.X
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DIS ITS A GOOD BATTLE// BUT MARV KILLED MM WITH PUNCHLINES// NICE FLOWZ AND NICE STRUTURE//

MM=NO VOCAB
NOT GOOD PUNCHLINES YO NIGGA HIT HARDER

V=MARV




AND YO NIGGA GIVE A VOTE ON MY HOMIE LOSTCHILD//
U GOTS TO END DIS DOG IF U DO MADDDDDDDDD FAVAS FO YO ASS NIGGGA


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120329
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Old 04-23-04, 11:05 AM   #11
Enygma
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
 
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From: Philly
IP: 70EC D981

Here's the way I saw it........

Marvey came pretty hard in this. He fell off from the punches in a few spots but he recovered before the end. Not his best work but it was very good. Murder came a lot harder than some of you are givin him credit for. I liked the way you changed the way everyone uses the jehovahs witness line and usin Cprog and Strobe was pretty hot. But you fell off in the middle and never really recovered............. so that's why I gotta go wit Marvey on this one.........

Vote - MarvolousJ1009
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Old 04-23-04, 11:40 AM   #12
Shadows edge
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From: Urbana
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Ok, its like this. Marv, you started hot, but then fell off. If you had kept it consistent, you would have won, but you didn't. The first bars had it all, personals, nice wordplay, original punches, and decent enough flow. Then you started stretching lines, your punches fell off, your originality went away... not solid.

Murderous: you didn't have any single punch that was quite as good as the m&m one, but you came solid throughout the verse. The supersoaker line is started to be played, but still not bad for a closer. I only wish you had more personals... but still you had nice flow, good punches and kept it pretty original throughout.

v/Murderous

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Old 04-23-04, 02:36 PM   #13
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Marvelous definitly took this by "storm" like Ben Frankin wit "kitez"

Marvelous came nice all the way through.
vote marvelous
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