Aight, I don't want niggaz to get shit twisted, I battle on elevated, but this lil' dickless prick wanted to talk some shit, so now I gotta son his poor ass. Ok lil' bitch, this is how it's goin' down.

5-15 bars
No hate or d/r votes
No crew votes(I know your whack ass ain't got one, this is just so you won't bitch and to show I don't need it at all)
3-0 TKO even though the mods neva close it
We can check in and drop at the same time, but you prolly a lil' bitch, ima drop in a few, feel free to feed off it if you need to wit your bitch ass.

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i dont need to feed off ya punk ass blind spit straight after check in.

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Aight, this is how it's goin' down you lil' shit talkin' bitch.

aahhheeemmm, that's I just had to clear my throat, Herbs about to get loked/
Spit or swallow you alway choke, Uz a joke, now I'm leavin' you witout hope./
Name's CJ, you gonna talk about guns, you couldn't see me in your scope,/
Mom Coulda smoked crack through pregnancy, U still couldn't come out dope./
Stumblin' ova your verse like a gimp, In your profile you claim to be a pimp,/
Heard that in you pants youz a shrimp, and that's why girls leave you limp./
Dogg don't you know you could neva wear my name, you only bring shame,/
You on the bench catchin' splinters in yo ass why you watchin' me win the game./
Nigga wanna talk tough, Neva heard of a gangsta from scot-land,/
Isn't that where they blow on pipes, and floss dresses instead of pants?/
Well that's fine 4 U, you prolly feel right at home, Skirts make it easier 4 U 2 Give dome,
That's why you wanna become a priest, cause you can't leave little boys alone./

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It's done bitch, spit. And that was str8 freestyle bitch. And What?

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And you blacklisted me you lil' bitch? Damn, you a sad lil' herb, now that bullshit gotta pop up everytime I check to see you weak-ass verse? Damn, you fuckin' pussy nigga.

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best of both worlds in your biography, i think you got it wrong/
im the common european jay, bitch ass drop out dont know whats goin on/
duh eh um its unnatural to be that dumb, whats that is it cum/
drippin down from your toung, thinkin he is hard wi a gun/
so if you are Hip-Hop, why cant you drop, bitch more like iggy pop/
now this bitch has more experiance than me, ill still drop like im on top/
thats life not a hobbie what a joke, bitch sittin there ready to choke/
better watch your old ass dont have a stroke, fuck this out for a smoke/
mc of da wood, posh ass fag thinks he is from the hood, still in the mood/
welcome to the doggpound, where bodies are found/
mama look i beat a newbie, thought he was gonna go through me/
ok son well done, maby now we can move out to the counTREE.....jay/
hold my hand so you dont go astray, maby lose you when we run away/
guess ill be on ma way, its over, done, finished, time for the fatality/
dont need nothin special but i guess ill use the animality/

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its done peace out bitch l8r homie

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Lol, first of all, I neva rap about guns, don't claim the hood, and I know you didn't try to come at me wit a weak ass-closer based on fuckin' Mortal Combat. Lol, that's some funnie shit you lil' homo thug.

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not the best battle but good for cj. your verse was better clearly. you lyrics made more sence. JAy you just was out of it. i don't know what the hell you were writting. but anyway. my vote still stands:
vote=Cj

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

yo it was a tight battle but i thought countree had the more devestain punches

dont forget give and take my dawgs got a few that need to be voted on

i'm a break it down simple for this battle

flow
CJ got the flow cuz he kept his shit together with sum funny ass rhymes so i cud really get into his spit.
structure
really both y'all had aight structure but CJ gets it cuz he kept all his shit together the same length bar like a line or two
punches
jay u came stronger than i've seen u do but still CJ took it with hard punches that had killa connection.
creativity
CJ got this cuz he used gud wordplay and threw in sum nice personals with a few multis in there to. jay u had sum nice lines but u did use a couple of made up personals which never work
Opener & Closer
no offense jay but ure opener was a little weak and the closer wud have been aight wit a bit more thought and if the MK shit hadnt been done b4. CJ gud opener, that clearin the throat was funny and u ended sick.

OVERALL
My vote goes to CJ cuz he flat out dominated this battle and it really did show u who was the newbie and who was the veteran rapper.

Return the favour playas
My links are in my sig.

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Uppin 4 some votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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i knew i was beat from the start man u been at this shit for a while ive only been here for a week or so. cheers anyway

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