a mothafucka like u needs to quit talking shit/
i seen your stuff and you cant rhyme/
cos u aint got no rhymes to come back with/
quite frankly the only things you rip/
are the ones you get while you lickin dick/
i'ma bring the heat and u cant handle it/
take hip hops's most greatest quotes, go home and study it/
u stepping to a nigga that spits flames/
you a dumb piece of shit everything you spit's lame/
i'll put a contract on your head bigger then Lebron James/
but theres no need since you already getting sprayed/
a bulletproof vest aint gonna get you saved/
cos my verbal attacks attack the mind/
i'ma like a desease/
i'll leave you ass behind/
you'll be fucked up like a poltergeist/
my words are like magic and they'll neva end/
you better believe in the after-life/
cos taking me on you better be prepared to transcend/
cos your body your family will never find/

Damn....Never knew were that wack, but ill spit anyway, here goes:

Im arellic, you're pathetic, forget it, dont sweat,
Before you get defeated and need a paramedic,
You little bitch, you say my words dont rhyme?,
Well tell me people - does desease rhyme with behind?,
"Da"?, Dont you mean "the" you crap non-rhymer,
It seems that every time you spit, you sound like a first timer,
You cant spit, just get off this forum you fool,
Or pick up a dictionary, and go back to play school,
You're getting a shitload of haters, while im getting fans,
So sit back & relex, and start clapping your hands.

Aight, done this quickly so sorry if it aint that good but hey.
PE@CE

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Razer Vs Dagreatest

Text Record:
Will A Peer Vs Razer (5-2)
Tha*Reign*Man Vs Razer (0-5)
Puertoricanelly Vs Razer (0-5)
guyver4mk Vs Razer (0-3): (Gave Up)
Da Greatest Vs Razer (0-5)

4 Wins, 3 Knockouts, 1 Loss.

weak battle
no punchlines
bad spelling

Razer
flow- $
vocab-$$
STYLE-$

Da greatest
flow-$
vocab-$
Style-$

..............................just Upping............................

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Razer Vs Dagreatest

Text Record:
Will A Peer Vs Razer (5-2)
Tha*Reign*Man Vs Razer (0-5)
Puertoricanelly Vs Razer (0-5)
guyver4mk Vs Razer (0-3): (Gave Up)
Da Greatest Vs Razer (0-5)

4 Wins, 3 Knockouts, 1 Loss.

uPPING ONCE MORE............................................

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Razer Vs Dagreatest

Text Record:
Will A Peer Vs Razer (5-2)
Tha*Reign*Man Vs Razer (0-5)
Puertoricanelly Vs Razer (0-5)
guyver4mk Vs Razer (0-3): (Gave Up)
Da Greatest Vs Razer (0-5)

4 Wins, 3 Knockouts, 1 Loss.

Overall This Was An OK Battle.Weak In The Punches Category.Disses Were More Prominent In This Battle.Razer Takes This One For Better Vocab Usage And More Complexity.Dagreatest Came Too Weak.

Vote-Razer

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da greatest lost this battle on himself. no structure or scheme really, just looked like u tryin 2 hard man half tha shit dont rhyme or make sense. razer had a decent flow and a few nice punches. razar was hittin harder and better vocan and wordplay. work on ur punches and flow 'dagreatest' and ull b aight down tha road. battle goes 2 RAZER takin ery catagory. keep it up fellas

winner:RAZER (flow,punches,vocab)

Razer got it though not a great battle...Flow and punches razer maybe structure for greatest

Razer=6/10
Greatest=4/10

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weakkkkkkkkkk assssssssss battle you both need to quit rappin seriuos but razor got it just for not suckin as bad as the other kid man this was awful

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A Queer That Voted On my Battles Constently


^ even after it says if u dont understand dont vote


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