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04-23-04, 12:54 PM
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Street Lights
IP: 6DCA 81D9
Street lights
A night of tossing and turning... ...almost absent of sleep Nerves upturned knowing in the morning ...he will finally drop to the single knee . . . . Morning brings nerves as James tries to perfect the words to say Hoping her reply will bring forth such an unforgettable day Cant help but to smile from ear to ear as he pictures the reaction But the nerves raise his hearbeat to the point he has to push it back in Prepares for the task at hand trying to look perfect but time crawls Seems like miles go by trying to get to the ride at the end of the apartment halls Emotions constantly slip and fall, but in the heart James must be right Finally reaches the car, checks the mirrors... ... and once again replays those words he has in store for tonight Praparations fall into place, pictures her face at the sight of the rock Reflects on the love thats formed from sleepless nights with soulful talk Almost to the intersection but cars have stopped, on Aurora and Shale So hurried to call the cell to make a new time, but only got voice mail Just a slight set back, she must be busy, maybe had to stay late But no harm done, called Sage, and pushed back our dinner date "Oh great" James thinks as firetrucks and ambulances rush by Thinking why today had to be the day idiots tried to drive Becoming worried, James gets voice mail again, followed by calls to Sage Its sad how nerves can turn such a minute inconvenience to rage 30 minutes go by and for some reason James' stomach starts to sink Cell rings, but its not the right tone. Instead the ID reads... Mercy Clinic So he starts to think, I lost my father last week, did my mother go? And as the phone approaches his ear James' stomach is now glued to the floor "Hello" he says with an uneasy tone, hands shaking, almost dropping the phone "I'm sorry inform you your brother Mark has just been hurt... his car - T-Boned Tears begin to fall. "Is he ok?, how about the other car?, was anyone with him at all? "He's already gone sir, and a girl - Carrie is still stuck, frame is still being sawed" Could it be? Carrie? do they mean mine? It cant be!!! "Whats her last name?" "Carrie Todd" "Oh god...... No... "Will she live?, Is she in pain?" "I'm sorry sir, but word just came through, she isnt going to make it" And at that moment, the realness of the whole stiuation began to hit Senses overloaded, its like connection not meant to be started to spark And then the phone drops, James looks up and honestly wishes he were Mark Its doesnt make sense, but for some reason all the thoughts are in his head But the one above all is his jealousy of the recently dead Another 20 minutes, finally traffic begins to move again But James stays still, fearing where he should have been Too emotionally drained to put the foot on the gas Cant believe ...he lost love so shortly after accepting it at last Thoughts relax, but still knows life will be tough Especially the thought of not getting to heaven soon enough Throughout the years been through a bunch But now is the time for to endure true fights But its odd how a trip for lunch Would put his emotions through the cycle of the street's traffic lights
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04-23-04, 02:42 PM
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IP: 6DCA 81D9
No replies?
Figures....
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04-23-04, 07:11 PM
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IP: AD41 912D
hell no i can barley readt that shit
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04-23-04, 11:26 PM
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IP: 6DCA 81D9
You are a moron
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04-24-04, 12:57 PM
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IP: 6DCA 81D9
I take it nobody knows how to read or something to that effect
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04-24-04, 01:42 PM
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Doesn't Belong Here.
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IP: 95FF 1D86
Judging by your style, i'd say you came from the Old RB or a much better board then this.
I'm not so good at replying to the poetic types of open mic's, but i'll just post to say I did read it and enjoyed it alot. It was nice to finally see something of this calibur posted here, but there's too many idiots to appreciate it. Edit: Who would've thought Chrit would still be on this board. Last edited by Karl Merks : 04-24-04 at 01:47 PM. |
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04-24-04, 01:55 PM
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IP: 6DCA 81D9
Meh... I just drop in here now and then...
Trying to bring up some talent Nobody wants to listen to my opinion however
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04-24-04, 08:08 PM
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Doesn't Belong Here.
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IP: 95FF 1D86
How come your name is Native now? It makes you seem much more herbish.
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04-24-04, 08:18 PM
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IP: 6DCA 81D9
I wouldnt satisfy the board by posting as any of my good aliases
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04-24-04, 08:23 PM
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Doesn't Belong Here.
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IP: 95FF 1D86
lmao, alright...
I think the moral here is that this site has turned to shit. |
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04-24-04, 09:37 PM
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retired.
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
^^ yes it has... and native/Chrit/whatever..
And as I said when you posted this in Poetic whatever forum, I think this is better suited as an open mic, it would probably go well over music, although you would need to find the right type of beat. Anyway, nice drop.
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04-24-04, 10:49 PM
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god help us all wat is this site comin too
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04-24-04, 11:21 PM
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That shit was deep Native, I was feelin' it. Nice to finally read something besides "bam bam I took my gun and ran" type shit. Keep droppin' cat. Peace.
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04-26-04, 12:11 PM
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IP: 6DCA 81D9
Quote:
What the fuck?
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