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Old 04-29-04, 11:24 AM   #1
Optiksz
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Stitch Up my Empty'ness

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I hate u for this Empty Shades//
Your my Death wit God's Grenades//
Razor Blades..and Tacks//
Until u Crack and give Back each Peice u Lack//
so precious U are and I'm deranged//
I mean Fuckin you is Strange//
Tie'n My soul to You//
My whole existence//
In this Instant//
Is the same But Different//
U want the Rest of me//
YOUR THE DEATH OF ME//
I got These Vultures and These Symbols On My agony but if that turned around//
Lovin u is addictive and so Summond//
Druling of the Satifaction//
Plus the Things Happin//
Is Dramatic and the peices are Spilling//
I hate you..NO.....I LOVE YOU your so refilling//
I got Worms In my head Swimming and souls are Tortured and No Catch//
Lets see what new Disease you'll Fetch//
I'm so crazy u Know//
and for you to be torn apart is the only way we'll be WHOLE!
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Old 04-29-04, 01:13 PM   #2
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Like Said In The Last Feed Back I Droppe Dthe Shit You Spitting Is Most Defently Hot But I Really Think You Have Problem You Needa Role Model Or A Hug Or Something....lol.....overall Fire Fire Fire....1
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my pager buzz to much man my hips are bruised//

faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor
trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1
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Old 04-29-04, 02:57 PM   #3
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yo this shit was aight. i liked the beginning part the best but u kinda fell off towards the middle and end. nice vocad but flow was a little off. Aight peice but u coulda done better....



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into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9''

why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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