iihjt lets go

10 lines
blind spit (jus drop wen ur finished ur verse)
no d/r cv or biting
no feeding
good luck

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KiLlAh BwOy

Aight another blind spit rules gotta keep em legit...uh huh Killah Bwoy good luck but its time u get bit...

(Verse)
10 lines aint enough to take out who i call this lil pup/
Mommy's been lyin to u ur life coz u iz mine heres my DNA...yup/
Aint no denying no point in lying ur my long lost child i was hopin 2 find/
And now i found u time to smack yo behind/
Coz u talk to daddy like shit...u like Will Smith tryin to put out a gangsta hit/
Dont spit ur not worth it...i can see u forcin words like........B-B-Bitch/
Oh no i've commited a crime...ive jus Kill-ah-Bwoy/ (Killed a boy)
Lemme fix the 'sitch' so its suicide u tried to deploy/ (Sitch = situation)
Killah u barely a killer i doubt u see murder believe its the truth i speak/
This bitch is a wanksta hopin to get signed by them ho's I.N.C/ (Muredr Inc)

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To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

Trust Me Dawg..Da Bwoy Will Put You In A flat Line-/
Kid You Aint Ill.. All The Shit You Spit is Half Mine-/
Packed With Nines put som'n on ya head and it aint ya Fitted-/
Kids Like Mike Tyson Cause soon as I drop a "punch" he already bit it-/
You MAD DOG? Smash Ya..have ya walkin with an oversized tampon-/
Merk You Quick Demolish Part of Ya Body So You Only Half Gone-/
Got you runnin faster than a black person in a horror flick-/
Make this kid wanna change sex..so its ova CHICK
Run Fast Cause Like an injured ball player I aint PLayin No Games-/
U Aint Known MAD DOG got kilt by DA BWOY is ya only 10 secs of fame-/



prolly my worst battle but oh well

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KiLlAh BwOy

Lets get the votes crackin up in here UPPIN.......

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R.I.P OMB

To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

10 lines aint enough to take out who i call this lil pup/
Mommy's been lyin to u ur life coz u iz mine heres my DNA...yup/


^^^ nice opener..haha

Aint no denying no point in lying ur my long lost child i was hopin 2 find/
And now i found u time to smack yo behind/

^^ Funny...but coulda been HARDER and funny...would have made it a better punch

Coz u talk to daddy like shit...u like Will Smith tryin to put out a gangsta hit/
Dont spit ur not worth it...i can see u forcin words like........B-B-Bitch/

^^ YEA boyee..nice line..coulda hit harder...but creative..nice

Killah u barely a killer i doubt u see murder believe its the truth i speak/
This bitch is a wanksta hopin to get signed by them ho's I.N.C/ (Muredr Inc)

^blah...weak-ish closer



Trust Me Dawg..Da Bwoy Will Put You In A flat Line-/
Kid You Aint Ill.. All The Shit You Spit is Half Mine-/

^^ NO...this is weak...prove his shit is half-yours..ur braggin is pretentious

Packed With Nines put som'n on ya head and it aint ya Fitted-/
Kids Like Mike Tyson Cause soon as I drop a "punch" he already bit it-/

^^ Is this supposed to be a personal...I'm not buying it...it's coming across more like ur just on your own dick, bragging.

You MAD DOG? Smash Ya..have ya walkin with an oversized tampon-/
Merk You Quick Demolish Part of Ya Body So You Only Half Gone-/

^^ eh..decent...


Got you runnin faster than a black person in a horror flick-/
Make this kid wanna change sex..so its ova CHICK

^^ That was wack.period.


Run Fast Cause Like an injured ball player I aint PLayin No Games-/
U Aint Known MAD DOG got kilt by DA BWOY is ya only 10 secs of fame-/

^^ WEak...


Breakdown:

Flow Tie
Rhyming Tie
Punches Mad Dog..DEFINITELY

Vote: Mad Dog...i think u just arrived man


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flow-tie
structure-tie
punches-mad dog
personals-none
creativity-tie
enjoyment-mad dog

killa......i feel you just didnt come as hard as u usually do and you under estamated this cat......you should throw in personals if you had dun that htne i think that you would have taken this

mad dog.....good job on gettin this cat......props to you with your punches and shit

v/dog

this battle was aight both verses was aight the punches go to killabwoy, starting line goes to dogg, creativity goes to killa bwoy n i liked reading killas verse
v/killa

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mad dog you killed him, i thought u had more punches and it flowed better so imma have to give it to you...

yet another person merked lol...

*breakdown*

killah bwoy

flow 7/10
punches 8/10
structure 7/10
rhymes 8/10
total 30/40

mad dog

flow 5/10
punches 6/10
structure 7/0
rhymes 6/10
total 24/40

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Best Line Of The Battle:

Oh no i've commited a crime...ive jus Kill-ah-Bwoy/ (Killed a boy)

^^Not A Hot Line, But The Only Wordplay I Saw In The Whole Battle. This Battle Lacked The Punches, Creativity, And Wordplay That Makes Battles Hot. It Was Aight I Guess. Yall Was Pretty Even, But I Liked Mad Dog's A Lil Better. Bwoy Started Of Good Wit The Multis And Flow, But Then fell Off. I Think Mad Dog Won But It Was Close.

VOTE: MAD DOG

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^^^ what battle were u reading>, aiyo, MAD, I'd contest that last vote if I were you...

killah had the metas and punches, he killed it was no contest

mad dog, u had some weak lines, only hot shit you did was the will smith line that was funny as hell, if you had more lines like that u mighta pulled it off

vote killah

^^^ LMAO @ deez votes...nebody with 2 eyes can see Killa ain't have no fuckin punches


hahaha...daz coo my man jus need 1 more to lay this shit to rest


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vote=Killa

Nice verses from each, but Killa's punches hit harder. His flow was a lil easier to follow too. Good job to both MCz, and congrats to whoever wins... Plz return da favor wid an honest vote (link below)...

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