house rules.....10 lines......you spit first.......good luck....time limit:freestyle this bitch.....

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i am bout to spit be prepared for hot shit

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Fuck wit me if u want nigga

freestyle it toh......non of tat pre-written shit or else....your dqued

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ok


battle blaze a nigga chase tha nigga in rage/ im in no race to catch a case/ in orderly sequence ya time will come/ i shoot you wit my lyrics i dont need a gun/ i dont battle you man cause i think you can get wit me/ i need exposure i did it all for publicity/ in the public eye on tha spot/ and whenever i on the spot/ whatever guy on tha spot/ get drained of all props/ my flow be my chioce of glocks/ as you feel the wrath of my voice box/ think about it chase ya not that big/ throwin lyrical punches that a crush ya ribs/got damn chase you dont know what i will do to u/ shit i be the one frrestylin at ya funeral/im new to the board but a vet of the game/my ego rather large shit my head to big for my brain/i continue to walk over u like rugs in a room/ i just murder this prick now he gets tucked in tha tomb

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thats frrestyle on every thing nigga go head and spit

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kay jsut saw it..............hold on ima type my freestyle up.....

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Im sorry to make your first battle on the site a terrible disapointmoint
After seein your verse, When they had Rap 101 claasses you missed ya appointment..
You went over the limit for your verse by 8 lines and there was still no punch
Your like Kool-Aide without sugar, nothin, black people hate you, get the hunch..
Said before you have an enourmous ego and run with desert eagles aint that a gat
But now you say you dont need to carry guns so where tha hell is the truth at..
Your sig" Fuck with me if you want nigga" aint that shit a little homosexual
Ya bein close to my skill is like comparing Einstein and Jessica Simpson as intellectuals.
Go ahead tell you freinds you an unstopable lyrical killah witty, and smoothe
But the truth is no matter what you say, who you suck, or what you do your gonna loose..

freestyle im tired and had 3 battles today sooo yeah...not odin my best....

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nice shit but how did i go over the limit by 8 lines

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Fuck wit me if u want nigga

it was 10 lines mx and you posted 18 lines sooooo yeah

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BigChase I think he only went over by half a line...Unless you are accustomed to a different form of counting.

Wasnt really feelin either of ya flows...Eragance didnt have any structure at all. While Chase had a lot of streched lines. Just wasnt much flow to either one of yalls stuff.

Chase threw a few punches...pretty weak stuff, but he did attempt a few of them. Eragance I wasnt really feelin what ya was doin, you need to break it down into lines and bars, so that peeps can see it.

Just a lil better overall verse from BigChase.

v/Bigchase

v ote

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lol.. hehe

chase:i think yougot this easily... rhymes was much more complex..actually had punches that hit.. flow was more complex.. easy win

eragance:i think you need to woork on putting punches in ya verse.. and maybe some personals. but you just a begginer, adn that all comes with time.. so stay up and battling..

v/chase

return vote on my battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133994

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

i wasn't really feelin eragance's flow at all, his setup was way fucked up, you need to put spaces in between your bars, dont lay it all out like a paragraph, had a few decent punchlines but the rest was space killa

chase on the other hand came mediocre, but he was still killin eragance, had better punchlines, i liked the jessica simpson and einstien thing, that was pretty tight

so all in all

chase got this

yo thnx all ya voters.....plz vote on this........uppin fo votes.....

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