Sry check.

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damn hott topical verses from both of you

unholy wun: nice shyt really felt it imagery wasnt all that great but how everything was worded and vocabulary was nice...a fairly easy topic but you worked it to your best abilites...i think if you would have wrote longer this would have been a dope topical piece but as of now i would say its straight

re$tricted has suprised me lately with amazing topical battle peices and this is a prime example...the wordplay in this verse was sickening...the imagery was amazing and the last bar where it says "I Feel The Hot Tears Run Down My Pale Face and My Brain Seems To Seize..
My Lifeless Eyes Are Now Accompanied By The Blood Rushing To My Knees.."<<best imagery i have seen in a topical battle just fire...everything was nice in this battle and restricted took this...

vote: re$tricted...hott verses from both but re$tricted really took control of this topic and dropped a hott verse

~!1!~

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

Unholy Wun & Re$TricTed very nice battle. you both had the realness of the heat of battle. i like the verbs you both used to describe your surroundings. even pointin out smell, sight and fellings. whoa what a nice ass topical battle. this batlle is close. Re$TricTed i liked your verse and the way you explained hoe u got caught and how you met your demise. Unholy Wun i like the way retreived the enemy info and returned to base. but unfortunately i like Re$TricTed's better better of the way he explained his whole ordeal. thats how's it s really goin down in Iraq for real dawg. nice verses guys but Re$TricTed gets my vote but way of knockout.

vote=Re$TricTed

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

This was a pretty good verse from both of you but I feel that Restricted had a better overall verse. Unholy had a good story but it was too short. You need to fo into more detail with your stories so people actually feel like they are there. Restricted went into pretty good detail and it was easy to visualize this but he made up a few words like Iraqians and Adjacement and a few others. This threw your verse off a little because I had to try and figure out what you were trying to say.

Vote - Restricted

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Enygma LoL...It Was Supposed To Be Adjacent.....Those Were Just Mispelled Words...LMAO...That Was My Bad, I Was Tired and In A Hurry..

But Thanks For All The Votes, Definitly Hot Battle..

Upping Dis

~R~

yo man sorry i dont got enuf posts but you seriously ripped this shit.....the imagery was fucking ill and your wordplay was good.....keep it up man\

uppin this for mi nizzle

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ok good verses from both but restricted easily he won he came with better imagery better vocab both had good flow and structure
unholy won u had a nice flow and vocab but ur imagery wasnt very good so work on imagery
r u dont really need 2 work on anything u won good verse

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