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Old 06-01-04, 09:18 PM   #1
HoPPa
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HoPPa Intro (feedback plz)

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Ladies n Gentleman, Watchout Its HoPPa,
Wrong use of words.. me n my boys'll Hop Ya/
Call me tha Heart Stoppa,
Cause im Aim'n at ya chest when i bring out my poppa/
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Old 06-01-04, 09:19 PM   #2
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FUck, my bad everybody, I wasnt done yet, it wasnt supposed to send yet. Damn.
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Old 06-01-04, 09:29 PM   #3
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Ladies n Gentleman, Watchout Its HoPPa,
Wrong use of words.. me n my boys'll Hop Ya/
Call me tha Heart Stoppa,
Cause im Aim'n at ya chest when i bring out my poppa/
P.Playerz, wanna talk about tha best?,
We bring out our weapons and you'll die like the rest/
So who tha fucks Next?,
We crazy mother fuckas, We'll plant a slug in ya chest/
Pull a gun up on me, i got my CLique to run to,
They come'n and they gonna run one up on you/
WUt u gonna do?,
Bring somemore people? and we'll murder your crew/
Ima Rep in this Bitch, PLATINUM PLAYERS!!!,
We comin wit the deepst, eliminate'n the haters/
If u one, we'll see your ass later,
and your family gonna see you, on the front of the daily paper!/
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Old 06-01-04, 10:06 PM   #4
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Cmon everybody give me some feedback, is it aright? it suck? im new here, i wanna know wut u all think of my style. Arite im out, peace.
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Old 06-02-04, 12:03 PM   #5
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im not quite sure if it suked mroe short or long bottom line is u need to up ya game....elevate big time kid...........
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