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05-18-04, 10:50 PM
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Above All Else
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Wut I Feel Bout This Guy
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This one guy i knew perminatley hurt me wen he deserted me//
This feelin he inserted in me made me want to have no talk concering he// I loved him much less after da new things I've discovered// I uncovered wut he did behind my back wit my own mother// 3 years together and for two years he cheated and desieved me// It felt like his fake released feelins beated and never relieved me// Never wanted to talk about him how his devoued power destroyed da inner of me like wen i first seen da 2 towers turn into a cloud of powder// I gave him one chance.....but I still only loved her once// That was all after I seen da people he was amongst// My anger increased inside its like i've been given STD// Always gonna have this disease, no cure for all da hate in me// Everyday waitin ta be, and always prayen for peace// Now i'm rake'n in greed, feelin like a racist haten believe's// Da only one I trust is Jesus and maybe a pastor or priest// Cuz from him i ain't feelin no luv, N startin ta smoke some good trees// If u asked me to define loyd, hatred is da definition// Now that he's gone from my life, there jst ain't no more use for livin// After bein wit this guy, I've finally learned a good lesson// Don't trust no more bitches like him cuz she stole my soul my only possesion// lolz..this isn't dedicated to my boy..jst for fun..hahaha!!!
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05-19-04, 08:31 AM
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*Da FeMaLe BaNdIT*
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IP:
lol well damn that's some fucked up shit im glad it ain't about no one u knew..ayo good drop try to stick some mulitie's in there...but over all good direction and good flow *STAY UP MA*
Spoken B.
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05-19-04, 09:27 AM
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(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP:
damn thats fuked up shyt yoo props to that iight u got madd talent wit ya word a few multis would make that alot stronger though overall good shyt.............................................. .
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05-19-04, 11:32 AM
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IP:
thanx....uppin feed plz
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05-20-04, 12:52 PM
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IP:
gd rhyme, nice layout, u got something good goin on wid words!! Hott shit, Keep em cumin man
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06-05-04, 11:56 AM
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IP:
uppin for more feed ppl
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06-05-04, 03:44 PM
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Flyweight
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IP:
it'z nice but it could've been better (sumthin u said)
and if ya boy waz really like that then tell em i'll fuck em up
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06-05-04, 04:30 PM
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IP:
lol..nah..dis waz jst somethin i made up
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06-06-04, 04:41 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP:
7/10 nice job
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