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ayo im new wit dis shit but my flow is decent...but anyways i want to know what yall think of dis...

ayo lyrically im a vandle bringin them ill skills that u bitches cant handle//
causin drama like tha bill and monica scandle//
talkin down on me and you'll get your whole crew dismantled//
im tellin you dawg we aint playin wit ya//
never slackin, for real we commin to get ya//
lil bitch be dead once my fist hit ya//
have your mom leanin over your casket to kiss ya//
look all you bitches is frontin//
stickin yall cheast out wit yo mouth runnnin like you want somethin//
but nope he aint doing nuthin, in his own mind he knows hes bluffin//
lil bitch get smoked like tha shit that im puffin//
your fuckin wit da grave diggaz BITCH your fuckin wit death//
straight up ill rip the fuckin lungs out of yo cheast//
place them in you hands and show u meanin of holdin your breath//
im ready for any muthafuka whos ready to test//
shut up bitch i aint tryin to hear yo nonsence//
my shit is labeled wit explicit content//
END OF STORY GRAVE DIGGAZ DUG YO GRAVE NO CONTEST...

and thats it yall im out for now its gettin late ight ~1~

that was hot i like that shit you spit for a newb

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nobody else postin what they think about this???

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it was cool tha structure was off though but good drop keep elevaten

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not liking the structure or flow but it was aight...

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Yeah man your flow was hot for a newb

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i liked it. good lyrics, good vocab. just the structure wus just a tad off, but other than that it was good, peace/

8/10 nice job