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gavin 0 0%
*The~Star* 5 100.00%
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Old 06-13-04, 05:51 PM   #1
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From: STL:314
gavin vs. *The~Star*

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10 Lines or 5 Bars
No Stretching
No D/R
Gavin spitting first
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Old 06-14-04, 11:02 AM   #2
gavin
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From: scotland
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Well your mamma got drunk and fell asleep in the zoo with a monkey and a zebra it cam out with you/
wot u gonna do wen my whole crew iz blazin at u u got nowere to run to watch me point this gun to your head leave you deceased A.K.A DEAD.
Boi i jack u and u whole family up with a blunt knife ure that weak coz im a little older im at the peak off my ryming ure terrible a timing ure. verse boy its time u had a rehears beforesum little nigga boots you outta the game u will proberly hit me with the same verse u used in yo last battle dont make me rattle youre teeth off the ground shoot u with a silencer so theres not a sound.

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Old 06-14-04, 01:34 PM   #3
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I'm ma take it eazy......

Gavin don’t want ‘none’ that’s why he stays out the ‘sun’
I’m bout to have ‘fun’ torching him with this ‘gun’
Talking ‘stuff’ but he won’t be able to back it ‘up’
I’ll leave him ‘stuffed’ as he would be for putting his hand in a ‘cup’
Come at me ‘wrong’, I’m bout to make you feel small like the crack of a ‘thong’
Trying to act ‘strong’ but he can’t do nothing when he on the ground with his mama singing that ‘song’
You ain’t touching my ‘game’ so you getting treated like the ‘same’
And that is get beat, cuz I destoy ‘lames’ that think they got true ‘game’
Trying to test ‘Star’, he must didn’t know I better than he’ll ever be by ‘far’
Leave ya red like the our neighbor ‘Mars’, leave you flat like some ‘tar’
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Old 06-14-04, 01:37 PM   #4
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No No

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Yo,I just realized that he used the word nigga and he white.U not to say that word man.
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Old 06-14-04, 02:05 PM   #5
Dreadedwicksta*
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LOL
well gavin just basic shit no punches..
star hands down, came harder
\\// the star

vote on my battle yall http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129694
 
Old 06-14-04, 02:16 PM   #6
B.X.P
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gavins structure was fucked up but he had some metas
gotta give him some credit
your flow ws off because of your fucked up structure
and his first line about the zoo and shit was played
no orginality there
your wordplay.......dont know im not reading it again
punches and personals.......... weak
need to elevate

the star
*props* good verse man
you had a ok structure
you had some extended lines but nothin to mess you up
your was flow wasnt bad
punches and personals hit alot harder
you had the better metas and wordplay so keep it up

v/star
 
Old 06-14-04, 02:18 PM   #7
B.X.P
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^ill vote when i get enough posts so dont bitch about it
pm if i forget
 
Old 06-14-04, 04:24 PM   #8
WillNova
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From: New Haven, CT
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Neither one were great, both need work... Gavin structure and flow was all f*cked up, but he was a little more creative. The star came real weak and even though his flow and structure was there I jus wasn't feelin it. So I'mma have to give it the Gavin... oh yeah watch ya mouth.

winner..... gavin
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Old 06-14-04, 04:45 PM   #9
HoPPa
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From: Pittsburgh PA
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star getz my vote, both were basic but he came down harder, alrite peace. return the favor.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129719

PeacE.
 
Old 06-14-04, 08:21 PM   #10
Prolicx
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gotta go wit tha gurl star she came way harda than gavin,
gavin had weak structure, overall weak
vote star
 
Old 06-14-04, 10:11 PM   #11
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Come on peeps,y'all sleeping.One more vote 2 get another KO
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Old 06-14-04, 11:18 PM   #12
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both were kinda weak but start came out pretty decent so my vote goes to star~1~
 
 


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