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06-26-04, 01:32 AM | #1 | |||||||
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this is the 1 verse to my 2nd song yo i want feedback yall
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
my rymes is water and demons are the fire and my team iz goonna win/
gospel nation/ the new rap empire/ and jesus is the sire/ im like kanye spittin through the wire/ if yu think yu betta than me yus a liar/ cause im the one the writer/ the one wit the serious flow/ thats gon be like whoa on ya radio/ neva smoke dro/ but ya dont hear me doe/ so here i go im not goin against i am the grain/ bringin the lyrical pain to ya brain like method main/ im not simple in plain/ i gotta reach like a crane for that top spot/ cause im the one that brung the non-cuss flows to all yo does/ cause the verbal is so large/ its gon put me in charge/ like marge simpson/ yull neva see me pimpin/ cause that a me b.c from leach d/ so when people hear me they gon be like wow/ and i aint gon throw in the towel
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The ONe wit the serious flow Last edited by bcdynamic : 06-27-04 at 01:11 AM. Reason: gotta change title |
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06-27-04, 04:43 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: DDD0 0780
Think this is the audio forum dog
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06-27-04, 04:46 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 3CF2 7138
nigga u suck
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