this is a quick 10 any feedback welcome...


i've lost a few battles, my style i start to question
maybe i'll find some answers in the open mic section
when i start checkin and try and get votes like an election
but no matter how i hard try i always seem to come second
all the feeback says i do well but my words lack structure
every text battle feels like it's the cold war and i'm russia
people came and start dissing me but victory i can taste it
there words start missing me but history repeats and i hate it
so i keep practising, elevating waiting to blow up like a bomb test
but the odds aren't on my side like mini-me in a dunk contest

More L

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Listen...i'll be flippin' the whole world system
Givin' it up and becommin' a christian - More L

that was alrite dun just work on structure

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The Council

the new testamin ft. anxiety (must see)

Bubba Bible Ft. Ajax[/SIZE]

^^ Wat Tha Hell He Does Have Structure...Nice Drop Nice vocab And Idk What he Think Structures Is^^ LOL

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