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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Tweeza 5 100.00%
Dissonance 0 0%
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Old 06-21-04, 01:45 AM   #1
Dissonance
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~#~ Dissonance VS Tweeza ~#~

IP: DBD1 6ED6

12 Lines
First to 5 wins
No feeding, recycling, biting, bitching
If you have a problem, discuss it like a man, not a bitch

Tweeza is spittin first.
Check in before you drop...
30 minute deadline once you've checked in.
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Old 06-21-04, 01:46 AM   #2
Tweeza
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Ok I'm checkin' in hunny! You ready for me to bring the heat?
 
Old 06-21-04, 01:50 AM   #3
Dissonance
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Only if you be makin me ma chicken pot pie with it bitch!! lol I'm waitin for yeh
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Old 06-21-04, 01:53 AM   #4
Tweeza
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What a name, Dissonance, are you trying to sound scary?//
How long did it take you to find that name in the dictionary?//
What the fuck were you smokin' when you made that name//
"Callin' Tweeza out" Bitch you're just using my name in vain//
Check it kiddo, my rhymes are sick, they won't give ya a chance//
Thas why I'm giving ya 30 mins to write your shit in advance//
Don't dare to compare with me cuz I swear I'll tear ya into pieces//
I'll make my little sister eat you up like 'reese's pieces' for breakfast//
You're just wasting your time, youz the definition of a "true loser"//
You go around and try battlin' other geeks on the computer//
Fool, I'm top notch you'll want to be a part of me//
Try to battle back you disgraceful black wannabe//
 
Old 06-21-04, 02:01 AM   #5
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I'm checkin in, but if I don't make it in the 30 minutes you can take the DQ.
Gettin kicked off this computer and the other one's in use...I'll try to get it
though. If not, enjoy the DQ and we'll do this again another time. Start the timer
I don't need a computer to jot this down...just to post it
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Old 06-21-04, 02:07 AM   #6
Tweeza
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Hmmm, you better post your verses, don't you dare chicken out! Make it fast! I'm not gonna take glory cuz I won by DQ. Don't pussy out...
 
Old 06-21-04, 02:31 AM   #7
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There's no pussying out motha fucka...lol I really wasn't able to get to a computer. I don't care if you count DQ or not, I'll post a verse...give me 5-10 to type something up
never keystyled before, but i'll give it a try for you
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Old 06-21-04, 02:33 AM   #8
Tweeza
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Ok fine. Enough with the excuses. Hurry up man your time limit is expiring... Givin' ya few more mins. SPIT!
 
Old 06-21-04, 02:42 AM   #9
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I aint never met you once or even read your rhymes,
and nothing I know makes you an enemy of mine
But I’ll ‘cut’ you to your ‘insides’ for mere pennies and dimes,
send you back to school have you ‘dissecting’ your rhymes
I’m dangerous, should have you raisin concern,
‘flip a bitch’ when you see me, try not to trip as ‘you(u) turn’,
It’s ‘wet’ so don’t forget, that tongue ‘slips’ and you burn,
ashes scattered to the winds, never to return
I’ll chew you full of holes like an apple with worms,
the same one I gave my teacher, for helpin me learn,
I have to kill her next, so I guess class is adjourned
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Old 06-21-04, 02:46 AM   #10
Tweeza
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Haha you got 11 lines. It's all good though. UPPIN' FOR VOTES!!!! PLEASE!
 
Old 06-21-04, 07:28 AM   #11
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From: Florida
IP: 2F05 D129

Tweeza got thisd one..he had harder punches than Diss plus the flow & the structure was aight..Dissonance your punches were ok but not as hard's as Tweeza's...

vote = Tweeza
 
Old 06-21-04, 07:48 AM   #12
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From: A place where u need to rap to keep ur head in the game.....itz fucked an everywhere i go i'm put inta a frame....rappin setz me bak an setz me free.....if u niggaz really new me....u just might be able to see
IP: 4874 E669

tweeza has thiz handz down, everythin wuz good by D but T just kame to battle harda then D


vote=tweeza
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Old 06-21-04, 06:11 PM   #13
Tweeza
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Thx guys for the comments! Still uppin' for votes!
 
Old 06-21-04, 07:36 PM   #14
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Uppin this again. I figured a loss...panick is not your friend...
lol anyways, finish this up
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Old 06-21-04, 08:53 PM   #15
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to me tweeza won dis battle dissonance that wasnt bad but u need to work on your punches
 
 


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