this is suppose to be audio homie,.. theres a place for that in this site. look it up cuz I dont remember just exactly it is. and Ur lines are basic kid. fix the ur structure, nobody likes to look at small structured verse, the flow was ok. but U should mix it up a bit to bring niggaz into Ur verse. check out my battles and audio in my sig so U can see wat I mean. I give Ur verse a 5 out of 10. not bad but could use a plot or something.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..