RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > Textual Releases
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 07-12-04, 02:52 PM   #1
flow2crazy
Simply Dope
 
flow2crazy's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,026
Joined: May 2004
From: The Ill State
Status: Offline
Takin Ill To A New Level

IP: C1DA C961

My desert eagle bangs harder than four fifteen inch subs
When i spit my rhymes i get ur mind spinnin faster than dubs
Talk shit imma cut all ur fingers off n leave u wit stubs
Im starting my reign just like the chicago cubs
My rhymes hit u harder than bats made of pine
Only thing i got corked is a bottle of white wine
The way ill deal wit fake emcees is put u all in a line
Unload a round wit fury leavin ur vision blurry
Your dyin out just like Keith Murray
Now i gotta dip outta there in a hurry
Cuz the cops on the way n i dont wanna c da jury

__________________


The Council


the new testamin ft. anxiety (must see)

Bubba Bible Ft. Ajax[/SIZE]
Send a message via AIM to flow2crazy   Reply With Quote
Old 07-12-04, 05:55 PM   #2
flow2crazy
Simply Dope
 
flow2crazy's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,026
Joined: May 2004
From: The Ill State
Status: Offline
IP: C1DA C961

uppin for some feedback
__________________


The Council


the new testamin ft. anxiety (must see)

Bubba Bible Ft. Ajax[/SIZE]
Send a message via AIM to flow2crazy   Reply With Quote
Old 07-12-04, 06:12 PM   #3
40z
New to RV
 
40z's Avatar
 
Posts: 2
Joined: Jun 2004
From: Brooklyn, NY
Status: Offline
Text Record: 3-4
IP: B09D C100

Structure wasn't great, but it was a so-so self gloryfying piece. Coulda been better if you had put more complexity in it.
__________________
Lyrics
One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
Send a message via AIM to 40z   Reply With Quote
Old 07-12-04, 06:13 PM   #4
40z
New to RV
 
40z's Avatar
 
Posts: 2
Joined: Jun 2004
From: Brooklyn, NY
Status: Offline
Text Record: 3-4
IP: B09D C100

__________________
Lyrics
One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
Send a message via AIM to 40z   Reply With Quote
Old 07-12-04, 06:33 PM   #5
YaYo
Flyweight
 
Posts: 175
Joined: Dec 2003
From: HAWAII....THA ROCK
Status: Offline
Text Record: 3-2
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: F04B 70DC

this wasnt bad. it could of been better though
Send a message via AIM to YaYo   Reply With Quote
Old 07-12-04, 10:59 PM   #6
flow2crazy
Simply Dope
 
flow2crazy's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,026
Joined: May 2004
From: The Ill State
Status: Offline
IP: 4289 77F4

uppin
__________________


The Council


the new testamin ft. anxiety (must see)

Bubba Bible Ft. Ajax[/SIZE]
Send a message via AIM to flow2crazy   Reply With Quote
Old 07-13-04, 07:50 PM   #7
flow2crazy
Simply Dope
 
flow2crazy's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,026
Joined: May 2004
From: The Ill State
Status: Offline
IP: C1DA C961

u gotta b kiddin me 20 views n only 2 peeps givin feedback damn
__________________


The Council


the new testamin ft. anxiety (must see)

Bubba Bible Ft. Ajax[/SIZE]
Send a message via AIM to flow2crazy   Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 07:00 AM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.