Inferior at banks because the superior in ranks are served first
Captain is above lieutenant, Rapping I invented to curve thirst
Thug on mission above suspicion like cops on blocks must rehearse
In uniform, to avoid the worse storm, shoes shined and my blues
Rhyme like BB king, see free bling when the Thrill is Gone, no clues
Like fish twist hooks got a list of books entitle rap
About some suicidal crap but in the hood bridal and trap
Between dream and reality an extreme fatality if wrong steps
Are applied cause intense haggling convince lagging don’t help
Didn’t think twice end up throwing stink dice trying to win
Money in complete control on the streets bold where lying is trend
My stats grow like Fat Joe but no chance to dance put on pants
Do the ROCCA WEAR on block hear and there sting like ants

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word play was nice but da rhyme scheme was soft it was more english writing than poetic rhythm n rhymes n da topic wtf were u tlkn bout who in world of hip-hop n rap n da streets wanna hear bout u dressed like da cops wit shiny shoes? jus keep practicin cuz practice makes perfect

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uh oh killla, u said somethin bad about his rhymes, he gone come out and make diss song towards you so watchout

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thanks for the props for real yall

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