10-12 lines
House rules
No feedin
No d/r

U drop 15 mins after me, if you take more than a hour u lose by DQ

Good luck...

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checking in

I feel sorry for this chick, she's about to get knocked senseless
Punches hittin you from all angles, dont fight back cuz u defenseless
Says she enjoys reading, but those book pages can't stop ya bleeding
But naw bitch, it just won't work, like annarexics who try breast feeding
Maybe you'll consider leaving, and save us the misery of seein ya verse
It's like you been cursed with tha worst rhymes ever seen on planet earth
Since birth u've been plagued with wackness, maybe u can get my illness
Cuz as of now u suck, and even tho u checked in u still ain't in this
Jus check out her profile, says one of her hobbies is " going to school"
How dope! She's makin me look like a fool, if only i could be that cool...*

* jus playin ya'll, im tryin to make fun of tha fact that she likes school

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a bitch like me pulls her guns out fuck her hair pins
and if i play games i play them to win
so by me fucking with you i don't know where to begin
i come from all over so there's no tellin where i been
if you disrespect me i'll put your face in my spinners while their spinnin
i start at the finish you end at the begining
it dont matter you losing case im winning
fuck your competition im out to get Ice that Glisen
the difference between me and you is im a bitch by nature and your a bitch by choice
that's why you got to spit on line until you get the surgery to change your voice

ayt both of ur flows were good black plauge i like ur punches but yo dont dis a gurl cuz she like school at least she doin sumtin wit her life ayt n 2 shy ur flow was nice but 2 b honest u need 2 work on ur punches plus u used a lot of shit from 1 of ur older post in open mic b original n work on ya pinches like i said but keep doin ya thing ma n remember practice makes perfectbut sry ma ima have 2 give dis 1 2 black no hard feelings 1 luv peace holla back

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you say you feel sorry for me cause im about to knocked senseless
but even if you tried you still would die cause my flow is resentless
yeah i like reading books and going to school too
but at least i explained my hobbies what the fuck do you do
besides sit on the computer and call yourself the black plague
dont get me started cause theres no end i'll have you crying for days
i didnt read about you but you know alot about me
so tell them about how when im around your bitch ass is forbidden to speak
go againt the word then your heat swift with the beat gripping the piece flipping your jeep it's not only about battling this shit gets deep
aint a game when the clippers plugged and the chair hiked up leave your face like a swosh bitch all niked up

Aight thanks for tha votes...

Uppin...

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lol better come back see jus work at ur flows n ur tru talent will shot practice shy u did better dis time but i baleeve da rules were 10-12 lines,house rules,no feedin,no d/r so u should of saved dat 4 a later battle but good job ma much betta

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yo i think i gotta go wit blk on dis 1... shy jus keep elevatin shawwty cuz u hott..

blk: yo i think u was more personal das y u got dis one. both had flow n punches were hittin hard but personality stood owt in urs. metas was iight n no real multis but u came better prepared.

shy:ill shyt but gotta be more in-his-face. u had punches but they couldve been about ne body. a hard-hitting punch kills the person u battling and thas it. like i said nice flow n vocab, no real multis but it was iight.

v/ blk plague

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shy ur verse was hot no doubt but you need to have personals aight work on that and you will be much better. Blk you took this with your personals but watch it she was close aight but ima go wit blk

yo return the favor here http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135995

~one xplicit

shy you need a little work but this isnt the end. keep practicin

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y'alls pretty good. just keep workin on yo timin n shit and y'all b fine. we in da big leagues now. im waitin if y'all wanna battle. hit me up yo! peace!

close battle but i gotta give it to black he got her on this 1..............

hey return the favor drop an honest vote

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136555