Yeah...it's my second time through...Lil Kay...Check it out..yo..

When I first stepped up to the mic, it was like, I was givin a whole new purpose
A whole new chance to escape from the obstacles and hard times of my past
And I knew I could make it last, all I needed was the right guidance and instruction
To create a hardcore hit and land myself a well deserved record production
And I've learned to never listen to the shit people say, cuz it only leads to misery and obscured self-destruction
But I've moved beyond that point and more focused than ever
To create that joint and make it be remembered forever
I know I can do it, I jus gotta keep my head held high and pull it together
But, I'm losin grip and I'ma bout to slip, I jus hope i can make it through this spit
Hell yea, I been through shit, wishin to call it quits
Dont get me wrong I aint perfect one bit, sometimes I jus feel outta place or misfit
Not belongin, foreva i been longin
But it aint take a genius to make the discovery
That what's meant to be is meant to be
So open up your eyes and maybe you'll see
The meanin that I'm sendin throughout this poetry
And hopefully you'll understand the way that that I am, the reason I'm me
So let this be a lesson to be
To follow your dreams and trust in God that if it's right you're sure to succeed

I'm untouchable, unstoppable, and undestructable
Nothin can get in my way big or small
meaningful or somethin with no meaning at all
whether it's an important decision or a simple phone call
My motivation cant be broken, it cant be touched, i cant be rushed, shit, I've already passed up way too much
Oppertunities that slide right by in fronta my eyes
I miss the good times, when life was so easy and carefree, and barely, did I have to worry about tellin the truth and showin sincerity
Cuz I was jus to young and it jus didnt comprehend, but now that I'm older I cant jus sit here and pretend
That everythings alright when it really isnt, that everything I've lost, I dont really miss it
And some shit that I do, I jus cant resist it
Even when I know that it's wrong, and maybe I've done it too long, my guilty consience creeps up as I write the words to this song
But I'ma put that shit behind me and only more forward, put my priorities in order
And thanks to everyone who stuck by me and kept it real
I couldnt thank you enough for bein able to relate and feel what I feel
And for acceptin me for who I am and not rejectin me for what I do
I dont know what I wouldnt done, if I wouldnt of had a friend like you

So when life's got you on pause and you feel like theres nothing to live for and you aint got any sort of a cause
Just erase those thoughts and let 'em all burn
Trace back to the begging and then maybe you'll learn
In a positive way, let your voice and prayers be heard
And maybe God will send you somethin good in return
Like reassurance in love, power, and success
It may take time, but it's all part of the runnin process
Of feelin higher than ever before, as happy as ever to be dug outta that hole
So let this be a lesson to all, that no matter how hard we fall, we jus gotta jump back up and continue to give it our all

nice shit kayla. nice rhyme scheme. good flow n wordplay. u just needa work on ur structure a lil. 8.5/10

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u definetly good wit da truthness of life in ur flow like country said work a lil on ya structure n you'll betta ya flow u got talent gurl keep postin 9/10 peace out n holla back 1 luv

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thanks u guys...uppin