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Please give me feedback
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Yo gimme some feedback,
OrientalDun Yeah I'm new and just marinatining like a steak I don't fake like an actor I stay fresh like a COKE I like to joke around from Jersey but now in VA Every day just writing some raps I'm chilling like a frezzer Don't play checkers like and old gezzer I rhyme cause its in my blood I stay cold like a BUDWISER Like a geyser I just let out my steam in my sprays I'm crispy like a bag of LAYS I eat a lot of rice I need some rapping advice I just trying to show and prove I could rhyme I'm sometimes slipping but I ain't tripping time Goes by fast like a corvette my spits are straight phat In the past there were the best rap records around, drat Like the cicadas there Barley anymore great rappers Just as PC data slips away cause some hackers All these fakes on T.V. are slackers They ain't real how they get a deal? I wish Jay-Z wasn't retiring the head CEOS should be firing chingy I dish crazy rhymes like a waiter I kill like the TERMINATOR Just tell me If its okay or whatever |
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