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seveno8 vs *The~Star*

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iighyt deez r the rules u set right?
10 lines max
no d/r
no stretching
I spit 1st

soon as u check in i'll spit my verse iight

07-21-04, 01:38 AM

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Cool...Let's get it poppin....Good Luck

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07-21-04, 02:28 AM

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dis gon' be more one sided than the november election
i'm beatin dis bitch faster than a horny niggas lonley erection
i don't know what u expectin' but don't expect 2 be winnin'
u can give niggas shevols and dey won't dig what u spittin
u aint no "star" you just don't light in the closet
i must be a QB cuz i got dis shit in da pocket
you makin death wishes like writtin wills
you couldn't be spitin dope shit if you spit pills

iight dats all me right thurr you up... good luck

07-21-04, 02:32 AM

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yo i fucked up dis line> ... "u aint no "star" you just don't light in the closet
i must be a QB cuz i got dis shit in da pocket"

replace don't with the

07-21-04, 05:14 PM

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Nice verse, but I’m taking this………

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You beating me equals a joke, like drowning people choke
Thinking it’s a hoax, you get more winded like a tornado, why you provoke
I’m dropping this dude faster then the job market percentage
He fucked with me, so I left him like his skills….disfigured & don’t mention
Mad cuz I create flames burning ya name up, just like ya rep
Got cha playing minds games to the point you in a mental institution needing help
Seven-o-eight, more like, Star-I-love-to-hate, cuz you know you intimidated
You graphite, I’m erasing you cuz you nothing, you Not Even Rated
I’m stabbing ya rhymes up more than OJ Simpson stabbed his wife
That’s a infinite amount of times, cold-hearted, you longer have life

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07-21-04, 05:15 PM

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100 posts & up 2 Vote

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07-21-04, 05:40 PM

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I think Star took this one. She had good rhymes in hers. 708 had good shit too but that "dope" line is kinda played out. Star came with some originality in metas like the tornado and winded one. Star gets the vote with good punches and metas.

Vote-Star

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07-21-04, 07:00 PM

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07-22-04, 12:18 AM

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07-22-04, 03:24 AM

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07-22-04, 04:18 PM

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07-27-04, 04:34 PM

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this aint a crew vote..caus eim not part of hardwood no more

708 came wit some heat,nice structure da boi had it movin nice..punches was the down side though none of em stood out and just gave him an advantage
star punches wasnt all that either but they hit better than 708..stucture fell off toward the middle but.no enought o get a loss

vote ,,,,,,,,,,,,,star

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07-22-04, 08:47 PM

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07-22-04, 10:15 PM

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uppin....uppin..... don't wanna waste a good battle

07-22-04, 10:58 PM

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