here we go..10-16 lines...both drop with in half hour..no cheatin

Jacket DQ'ed for pming for votes:

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Originally Posted by Jacket im lookin for an honest vote on this shit...the fava will be returned...Jacket http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129135

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129079
vote on that and ill come back hear and vote when your both done..

check it...
Lil-trip, the bitch, should have picked a different game.
You were off on the wrong foot, startin with your name.
Let me take a guess, on how you thought so bad…
You were cleanin yo rap game and you tripped on “Glad”??
Your just a pathetic piece of shit, your missin talent and skill.
I’ll spill yo rhymes on my grill until I fulfill the kill.
And still, it’s a thrill because I give you chills.
Your shakin like a fene that popped fifty pills.
This is it, give it up, you got know where to go.
The only way you’ll win is if in Hell it snows.
Im throwin a fist, while your runnin and duckin.
Im barkin out game while your chirpin and cluckin.
This aint even a battle, it’s a lesson for the dumb.
You even think of pop’n rhymes, I’ll chew you up like gum.
Im gonna leave you stunned, when I click post reply.
So thank you for the effort, but your done, Good-bye!

haha lets get some votes!

Check *Mic* this bitch aint Big-tymers Reppin *Ice* your the 2004' Vanilla Ice
"Hi Kids names Jacket..'...thats nice, keep doodlin on yo pad from fisher price
Jacket stop it step back from yo reality u see a mans "head" n always Cock it
jus take this "Roach" n spark it yo "WheelChair" run is over homie jus park it
Im hear reppin raps Genocide n "Us" united don' appeal to yo fag Homo vibe
Wit yo bra i Got U a new "Padded" Vest to buy, minus the "Jacket"
Didnt ask god for a pussy sender...remeber? Yo heart is **soft** n Tender
Im the F-150 **Straight-Gender** on Audi Bitches I leave "Fender-Benders..'
Im a vet yo a rookie i Cwalk n don 2-step homie so recognize n don Push Me
I suck n eat Pink "Pussy..' this is Chess ive been "Crowned" U don "rook Me"
You keep hollerin bout respect but yo lines keep inadverdently seem Indirect
Gain my respect next time we intersect U speak rap not shit as yo main dialect
This forum is to make a bet n will treat this battle as the day we first met
Jacket "Covered" n Deaf hearin this wit Death I went *Straight* he chose *left*

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No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

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durin the spit near the rhyme near vibe it cut out a portion, heres the fulll..


"Hi Kids names Jacket..'...thats nice, keep doodlin on yo pad from fisher price
Jacket stop it step back from yo reality u see a mans "head" n always Cock it
jus take this "Roach" n spark it yo "WheelChair" run is over homie jus park it
Im hear reppin raps Genocide n "Us" united don' appeal to yo fag Homo vibe
Wit yo bra i Got U a new "Padded" Vest to buy, minus the "Jacket" known to hide
Didnt ask god for a pussy sender...remeber? Yo heart is **soft** n Tender
Im the F-150 **Straight-Gender** on Audi Bitches I leave "Fender-Benders..'
Im a vet yo a rookie i Cwalk n don 2-step homie so recognize n don Push Me
I suck n eat Pink "Pussy..' this is Chess ive been "Crowned" U don "rook Me"
You keep hollerin bout respect but yo lines keep inadverdently seem Indirect
Gain my respect next time we intersect U speak rap not shit as yo main dialect
This forum is to make a bet n will treat this battle as the day we first met
Jacket "Covered" n Deaf hearin this wit Death I went *Straight* he chose *left*

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The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams.

Tupac Shakur

No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

- Lil Trip

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trip, i find it very odd that you were able to post this shit twice..makes me think maybe it was prewritten, but whatever.. YOU ALSO WENT WAY OVER THE TIME LIMIT..but whatever....Jacket and trip need some honest votes!!

no...

when i was writin the verse, in that section i got hungup on the verse so i jus moved on..

than i hit submit n forgot i hadnt filled in that dumbass..don post your nonsense before Pm'n n droppin your opinion before the facts, uppin for votes...

you wouldnt even be talkin if i dropped a prewritten verse on you, so don get ahead of yourself i don cheat i keep it real...uppin

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The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams.

Tupac Shakur

No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

- Lil Trip

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uppin fo votes!!

yo jacket im thinkin the same as you on the prewrite but what ever you still won cause you had an all around better verse
V/jacket

Jacket takes this imo, he had better flow and structure and he came with some good punches. v/ jacket

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i think jacket won cuz of his punches. His flow went good wit his wordplay. His punches hit harder then lil trips too.

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punches:jacket
flow:jacket
wordplay:none
structure:jacket
personals:both
overall:jacket

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uppin fo votes..lets close this one out

aight I have to give this to Jacket because I was feeling his verse more....
flow, vocab, punches, rhymes basically everything well therefore Jacket
gets my one and only vote

do a honest vote on my shit the links in my signature

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