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dysphoria 5 100.00%
phatinum 0 0%
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Old 07-29-04, 12:45 PM   #1
phatinum
Light Weight
 
From: tha ghetto
phatinum vs dysphoria

IP: 7705 24C5

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-01-04 at 12:45 PM

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Old 07-29-04, 12:46 PM   #2
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phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 12:46 PM.
 
Old 07-29-04, 12:52 PM   #3
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dysphoria has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 12:52 PM.
 
Old 07-29-04, 12:57 PM   #4
phatinum
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From: tha ghetto
IP: 7705 24C5

nigga i ride till i die i fck you mum till she crys
the pain blood flowin out her pussy sit down rookie
i might b new to da game but i still kick ya ass outa the foutune and fame you need to change ya name
ill put nine bulletsstraight to ya jaw y u comin bk 4 more
u make your self look like a prick 1 pin now u gon sucking dick
just get it threw ya head im a boi and your a chick
and now im leaving dis battle talking shit bitch
 
Old 07-29-04, 01:28 PM   #5
dysphoria
Flyweight
 
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From: LA
IP: 077D AEBD

Intro :

I'm The Type 2 KILL YOU In COURT While You TAKEN' YOUR OATH Creatin' A COLORFUL BIBLE ...
Raw Gangsta Pull A 187 On An Airplane AFTER The TAKEOFF So You DEAD ON ARRIVAL !!!
The Good Guy Win'z In The End ... Oops I Didn't Mean To Spoil It ...
I Battle You Cauze You AINT GOT SHIT Like An EMPTY TOILET !!!
You Can't Even HATE Me Cauze You Open Your Mouth While I'm STICKIN THE LOVE IN ...
And Your BEATS Couldn't Be Hot If You Kept Your DICK IN THE OVEN !!!

Engagement :

You FLOW LIKE A PUSSY ... So Amma Have To FUCK WITH YOUR RHYMES ... If You Injected Your CRACK WITH THE FLU ... You Still Couldn't Be SICK WITH YOUR LINES
Kid What Made You Think That You Could Beat Me in A Battle Using Your Pop Rhymes ...
Your Raps Is Like CRACK Mixed With BABY POWDER ... Dawg They Some SOFT LINES ...
I'm Quite Urban ... This Pussy Nigga Better Learn Who He Disturbin' ...
PHATINUM Wouldn't Have The BOMB WRAPS (Raps) If He Was ROCKIN LADENS TURBAN ...

KO :

My Lyrics Are Fists ... The First One Thrown Will Just Graze Your Skin ...
The Second Is The PUNCH LINE That Will Engrave Your CHIN !!!
PHATINUM Better Get Used To BRAILLE Nigga Cauze My Lyrics RUN YOU BLIND ...
You Have Guys JACK OFF On Your Head Just To See What CUMS TO MIND ... OUT
 
Old 07-31-04, 12:16 AM   #6
dysphoria
Flyweight
 
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From: LA
IP: DFBA 0C5F

where the votes at ! don't sleep people .. uppin uppin ... c'mon y'all been for waitin for days ...................
 
Old 07-31-04, 12:20 AM   #7
KroNuz
 
From: New York
IP: 59B3 099F

Voted For: dysphoria

Phatinum- You Need To Start Battleing Weaker Katz, Cuz You Going For Some Good Ones And Thats Not A Good Way To Start Out, Verse Was Simplistic, And Punches Were Basic, Flow Was Decent Tho, And Structure Was Better

Dy- Wasnt Feelin Structure Made It Hard to Read.... But.. Punches And Wordplay Were But, Aswell As Metaphors..

Punches- Dy
Flow- Phat
Wordplay- Dy
Meta- Dy
Structure- Phat
Originality- Dy

Final Vote--- Dysphoria

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Old 07-31-04, 12:29 AM   #8
roop
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From: Orlando
This was feedback posted for dysphoria

IP: 8254 17B8

No punches at all man. Good flow but i am going to give it too you cause you had some complexity.
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Old 07-31-04, 12:30 AM   #9
roop
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From: Orlando
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crap this new system messed me up, i thought it was type what you thought about each one. Damn
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Old 07-31-04, 12:32 AM   #10
DV8
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IP: 9088 AED1

Voted For: dysphoria

this verse was better all around n was obviously tried at,good even if ya did have some stretched lines i dint mind considering the content n complexity of them...some original punches n nice wordplay..good job..1st verse dint like it......basic all around srry dawg but ya need ta elevate...
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Old 07-31-04, 12:36 AM   #11
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Old 07-31-04, 12:46 AM   #12
Hitchcock
 
IP: B9AB 64CC

Voted For: dysphoria

ok....wtf is phatinum doin besides gettin murked. im sorry dog but even u cant say u won this battle lol he beat u on every level except....shortest verse just elevate n come back stronger
v=dysphoria
phatinum just take ya L like a man lol n move on
return the favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136648
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136408
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136650
 
Old 07-31-04, 11:57 AM   #13
dysphoria
Flyweight
 
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From: LA
IP: 077D AEBD

thanx y'all for voting .. appreciate all who did .. i guess 3-0 is a KO ? ma first win y'all .. bitches and drinks on me .. returnin the favour peace
 
Old 07-31-04, 12:24 PM   #14
!RIFF RAFF!
Banned: Biting
 
From: Newcastle..England..
IP: CCAE A7E8

Voted For: dysphoria

dysp you won this straight out no competition
phatimum no hate but you do need to elevate
dysp your closer was tight ......
phatimun try using lines that rhyme.you may stand a better chance
 
Old 07-31-04, 01:39 PM   #15
~Luciano~
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From: $.W Detroit
IP: D135 D6AF

Voted For: dysphoria


that should b a dq for 2 many bars but overall it was an aight battle i guess it came down 2 who had better wordplay and the
harder punches and that went 2 Dysphoria even tho you went way over 6 bars tho cuz but still you had better wordplay and harder punches in ya verse which is wha got you the win, but work on ya structure
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