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07-26-04, 09:41 PM
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I'm So Punny
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Spotlight match-Flash(2-1) vs. Premanition(2-1)
IP: 95FF 1D86
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battles go up monday check in by wensday verses due by thursday votes due by the next sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 20line max. REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!
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07-27-04, 12:06 PM
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-Classified-
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IP: 2849 F938
check......
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1443658 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1446148
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07-28-04, 03:16 PM
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IP: 2B15 15F1
flash ur lame....the whole of rb thinks u 'overated' n plain....
ur big mouth will course u pain..... .....leave u carryin more weight than them girls below ya name.... u hate opposition thats decent....prefer any challenge absent... sdizzle was there to battle....but of a no show u were adament...(link 1) every verse u key bores~me...spend ya whole life tryin to whore~me... complainin be ur life's story...fuck bitchin leave this to the 'jury'...(crews name) bringin fury to flash….in and out, I spit this shit in a dash… cos I worry wackness is contagious n you'll leave me in a rash... wack hoe…ur structure means ur opposite to wot defines flow… jus to let u know…this a rap board not a personal crisis chat show…..(link 2) this guy makes threads with enthusiasm and contention… waits patiently to see his name but neva gets a mention….(check links 3&4) The Crews Name Line Was Right But Now They've Split, But Bare In Mind It Was Right Wen I Posted http://community.rapverse.com/showt...12&page=3&pp=15 - Link 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137700 - Link 2 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=134559 - Link 3 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=134897 - Link 4 please check links
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07-29-04, 10:37 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 1C0F 1C11
hahah iight ill have my shit up tonight.....G'luck kid
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07-29-04, 10:41 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 1C0F 1C11
and the jury is dead so that line is kinda useless
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07-29-04, 12:02 PM
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IP: F81B 94D3
well everyone knows thats happened after my verse was posted, so don't sway, just post..............
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07-29-04, 01:40 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 1C0F 1C11
we split like last week cause they murged wit mosaic and now are textual ill~ness
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07-29-04, 02:36 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 1C0F 1C11
Severly Crushin ya Thoughts & Mind Till He Vanish-His-Chest ... Flash "Murder-ya-Soul" Till ya Vanity-Rests
Banish ya Text Till Your Verse Matters Flawed .. Also And i'll Have This Man Splattered-On-A-Board Like Anti-Protests! Premanition Punches Stick with Played-Trends Certainly Sick When i Slave-Friends ... Wont Tame-my-Lens My Optics Slay ya Wrists Once Defeat-At-Hand Flash Beating-ya-Glands .. And i'll End this "Pre-Man" Quick Like Cave-Men! The Wacc Won't View The Risen .. See ya Bars Get Abused In Prison .. Premanition Weak & Futile-When-Spitting So Kid Dont Dispute-this-Rippin When Giants Fall In Cast .. And Flash Ripp Out ya Eyeballs-In-Class Till His "Pupils-Are-Missin"! Flash Scathe This Herb-Specialist ... Burnin Pessimists .. Learn i'm the Best At This ... Catchin ya Words-Envisioned-With-Fists Emcees I'm Pokin So Dont Contest with Villains Or i'll Have "P/Pee-Out-In-Open" Like Perverted-Exhibionist! This Rape is Serious Fastening ya Flow Like Tape On Peroids...Bustin Vets Fuck ya Respect I'll Even Write ya Lines On Card Decks And Flush-ya-Text Ya Thrones Dead .. I'm Put "Combs-on-ya-Head Cuz Your Due For A Brush-With-Death! .. structure stretched as fuck but oh well Last edited by flash : 07-29-04 at 03:03 PM. |
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07-29-04, 02:49 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: DB8D 5EE9
Yea Structure Was Stretched But NiCe Multis No personals really But Nice Drop Flash Pre You had Some Nice Personals Flow was Sick And Nice Drop Severly Crushin ya Thoughts & Mind Till He Vanish-His-Chest ... Flash "Murder-ya-Soul" Till ya Vanity-Rests Banish ya Text Till Your Verse Matters Flawed .. Also And i'll Have This Man Splattered-On-A-Board Like Anti-Protests! Premanition Punches Stick with Played-Trends Certainly Sick When i Slave-Friends ... Wont Tame-my-Lens My Optics Slay ya Wrists Once Defeat-At-Hand Flash Beating-ya-Glands .. And i'll End this "Pre-Man" Quick Like Cave-Men! The Wacc Won't View The Risen .. See ya Bars Get Abused In Prison .. Premanition Weak & Futile-When-Spitting So Kid Dont Dispute-this-Rippin When Giants Fall In Cast .. And Flash Ripp Out ya Eyeballs-In-Class Till His "Pupils-Are-Missin"! Flash Scathe This Herb-Specialist ... Burnin Pessimists .. Learn i'm the Best At This ... Catchin ya Words-Envisioned-With-Fists Emcees I'm Pokin So Dont Contest with Villains Or i'll Have "P/Pee-Out-In-Open" Like Perverted-Exhibionist! This Rape is Serious Fastening ya Flow Like Tape On Peroids...Bustin Vets Fuck ya Respect I'll Even Write ya Lines On Card Decks And Flush-ya-Text Ya Thrones Dead .. I'm Put "Combs-on-ya-Head Cuz Your Due For A Brush-With-Death! .. 8.2/10 Stretched..But The Multis Damn They Was Sick...Had 2 Re-Read flash ur lame....the whole of rb thinks u 'overated' n plain.... ur big mouth will course u pain..... .....leave u carryin more weight than them girls below ya name.... u hate opposition thats decent....prefer any challenge absent... sdizzle was there to battle....but of a no show u were adament...(link 1) every verse u key bores~me...spend ya whole life tryin to whore~me... complainin be ur life's story...fuck bitchin leave this to the 'jury'...(crews name) bringin fury to flash….in and out, I spit this shit in a dash… cos I worry wackness is contagious n you'll leave me in a rash... wack hoe…ur structure means ur opposite to wot defines flow… jus to let u know…this a rap board not a personal crisis chat show…..(link 2) this guy makes threads with enthusiasm and contention… waits patiently to see his name but neva gets a mention….(check links 3&4) 8.1/10 Personals Was Good But He Had You In Punches And Multis..
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07-29-04, 03:18 PM
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"Click Clack"
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IP: 6247 B101
Prem
flash ur lame....the whole of rb thinks u 'overated' n plain.... ur big mouth will course u pain..... .....leave u carryin more weight than them girls below ya name.... u hate opposition thats decent....prefer any challenge absent... sdizzle was there to battle....but of a no show u were adament...(link 1) every verse u key bores~me...spend ya whole life tryin to whore~me... complainin be ur life's story...fuck bitchin leave this to the 'jury'...(crews name) bringin fury to flash….in and out, I spit this shit in a dash… cos I worry wackness is contagious n you'll leave me in a rash... wack hoe…ur structure means ur opposite to wot defines flow… jus to let u know…this a rap board not a personal crisis chat show…..(link 2) this guy makes threads with enthusiasm and contention… waits patiently to see his name but neva gets a mention….(check links 3&4) i would break this shit down line for line but i just did that with the Heavy champ match so here...hmmm you used some personasl and decent punches nice drop.... overall: 8.0 Flash Severly Crushin ya Thoughts & Mind Till He Vanish-His-Chest ... Flash "Murder-ya-Soul" Till ya Vanity-Rests Banish ya Text Till Your Verse Matters Flawed .. Also And i'll Have This Man Splattered-On-A-Board Like Anti-Protests! Premanition Punches Stick with Played-Trends Certainly Sick When i Slave-Friends ... Wont Tame-my-Lens My Optics Slay ya Wrists Once Defeat-At-Hand Flash Beating-ya-Glands .. And i'll End this "Pre-Man" Quick Like Cave-Men! The Wacc Won't View The Risen .. See ya Bars Get Abused In Prison .. Premanition Weak & Futile-When-Spitting So Kid Dont Dispute-this-Rippin When Giants Fall In Cast .. And Flash Ripp Out ya Eyeballs-In-Class Till His "Pupils-Are-Missin"! Flash Scathe This Herb-Specialist ... Burnin Pessimists .. Learn i'm the Best At This ... Catchin ya Words-Envisioned-With-Fists Emcees I'm Pokin So Dont Contest with Villains Or i'll Have "P/Pee-Out-In-Open" Like Perverted-Exhibionist! This Rape is Serious Fastening ya Flow Like Tape On Peroids...Bustin Vets Fuck ya Respect I'll Even Write ya Lines On Card Decks And Flush-ya-Text Ya Thrones Dead .. I'm Put "Combs-on-ya-Head Cuz Your Due For A Brush-With-Death! .. I only saw one personal pretty good punches and you had some multis.. good drop overall:8.1 good battle....props to both close shit though
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07-29-04, 06:21 PM
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Dope.
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IP: 2B92 F022
Both came decent but flash took this for his multi's they wer strong..
Both were even on punches and flow so flash took it on Multi's.. Vote.:.flash pz.
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07-29-04, 07:56 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
both came pretty tight.
Prem, you had some nice punches in there. I was feelin' them. Some hit hard, and some didn't. Your flow was also pretty tight in this verse. Good job. But yea, overall nice verse. Flash, you also had a good verse. You had a hot verse. No punch really hit that weak, so you got the edge in punches. Yo flow was also a little better. So good job overall, Flash edged this one out. V/Flash |
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07-29-04, 08:44 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: D27D 0B18
My Optics Slay ya Wrists Once Defeat-At-Hand Flash Beating-ya-Glands .. And i'll End this "Pre-Man" Quick Like Cave-Men!
The Wacc Won't View The Risen .. See ya Bars Get Abused In Prison .. Premanition Weak & Futile-When-Spitting So Kid Dont Dispute-this-Rippin When Giants Fall In Cast .. And Flash Ripp Out ya Eyeballs-In-Class Till His "Pupils-Are-Missin"! ^^^That shit was hott...Flash U definatly took punches...i was likin the multi's and the wordplay/nameplays as well.... I'd give your drop an 8.5/10 wack hoe…ur structure means ur opposite to wot defines flow… jus to let u know…this a rap board not a personal crisis chat show…. this guy makes threads with enthusiasm and contention… waits patiently to see his name but neva gets a mention…. I liked these lines the best from you Prem....You took Personals and Flow...I'd give your drop a 7.7/10 Overall Flash Took This He Came Harder |
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07-29-04, 09:02 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 1294 0BE9
thanks for the votes people.....
close this i wun 5-0 |
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