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07-30-04, 12:26 AM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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Dat's How We Roll
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Yo Dis My Trac Talkin Bout How We Rollin In Cashville
 Hook: Big Bodies On 24's Nicca, Dat's How We Roll Top An Bottom Golds Nicca, Dat's How We Roll Tha Finest Ass Hoes Nicca, Dat's How We Roll Air Forces & Shell Toes Nicca, Dat's How We Roll V1: Now,Welcome ta tha ville nicca where we stac are chips, we drive big body cars wit Li-Ocean Tilts Plus tha interior in dat bitch be Whyte Diamond Silk, An if u look in tha trunk tha carpet be tha color why-te milk My Nicca, we pull mo hoes by jess flossin I golds, Now cum down in tha ville so I can show yall hoes how we roll Hook: Big Bodies On 24's Nicca, Dat's How We Roll Top An Bottom Golds Nicca, Dat's How We Roll Tha Finest Ass Hoes Nicca, Dat's How We Roll Air Forces & Shell Toes Nicca, Dat's How We Roll V2: You'll catch my niccas in tha club throwin up they sets, look in they mouth at they grill an it reps they projects An we dare u ta flex, we'll leave u where u stand fuk given yo ass respect An if its war my niccas stay armed up wit dem 22 teks, ready fa combat at any tyme an snappin off niccas neks We'll leave yo ass ta die off in a hole my nicca dis how we roll Hook: Big Bodies On 24's Nicca, Dat's How We Roll Top An Bottom Golds Nicca, Dat's How We Roll Tha Finest Ass Hoes Nicca, Dat's How We Roll Air Forces & Shell Toes Nicca, Dat's How We Roll V3: Down in tha ville we got tha finest hoes, down in tha ville we roc Air Foces & Shell Toes Down in tha ville we talk ta show our golds, down in tha ville clukers put whyte up they nose Down in tha ville nicca we sittin on 24's down in tha ville nicca dis is how we roll Hook: Big Bodies On 24's Nicca, Dat's How We Roll Top An Bottom Golds Nicca, Dat's How We Roll Tha Finest Ass Hoes Nicca, Dat's How We Roll Air Forces & Shell Toes Nicca, Dat's How We Roll Copyrights 2004 L-N-L Material http://www.geocities.com/ukthaunkno...adEntertainment
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07-30-04, 03:00 AM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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IP: 28AD 5545
Yo read my shit an gimme sum feedbac
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07-30-04, 05:55 AM
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Cypher King. True Story.
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IP: F177 A97F
It needs refinement. Mostly grammatical. The way everything was spelled was hard to really follow. Work on that.
Verses need more length. You're dropping three bar verses. Not cool. And the third verse that you have really doesn't need to be there. It's just repeating the same thing over and over again. Keep working on it. |
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07-30-04, 09:24 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: CCAE A7E8
couldnt get into it................
need to work on it............... |
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07-30-04, 07:30 PM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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IP: 3240 794D
Thanx fa tha feedbac..................keep Dem comin
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07-31-04, 02:13 AM
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fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: 75DF D0BD
da structure n flow was basic but like dude said 3 bar veres need 2 go niggaz lookin 4 a hot 16 but keep doin yo thing not bad overall holla back
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07-31-04, 04:20 AM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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IP: 3240 794D
Yo Thanx Raw.
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