10lines
no hate,d/r,crew votes
u go first as agreed....
gd luck

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i got a lame ass mc on my ass trying to bring me down
but you cant touch me,yet alone my crown
so stop trying,sit in your hole and cower
cuz im unbreakable,think of me as the tower
now here we come to your final hour
so forget the game and move on ya coward

Taking a look at this fools posts…u’ld notice he a retard,
U diss him he gets confused..his brain is just like a lizards
son,u battleing me has put an end to ur kiddy dreams........
cos i eat up weak mc's & my spits gon make you scream
ur shit didnt make sense..you fucking dumb..boy no offense
u shudn't have insisted on spitting first,cos u just a lil twerp
ur structure really sucks..i think its hight time u duck
and u so outta luck,therre aint no room for an ugly fuck
the rules said 10 lines..but i c u too foolish and blind
u r lyrically slacking boo..guess its too much of jafool
im dont with this fake,cos he nothing but a hoecake


xplanations:

U diss him he gets confused..his brain is just like a lizards <<<< looking at his posts you'll see he gets confused easily..and his brain is like a lizard's cos he thinks like and animal....

son,u battleing me has put an end to ur dreams........
cos i eat up weak mc's & my spits gon make you scream <<<<<weak mc's..i was talking about him.......put and end to his dreams&make him scream...cos im his nightmare..(lyrically speaking too)

u shudn't have insisted on spitting first,cos u just a twerp <<<< he evn got confused when i said blind spit..but as he kept on insisting saying"i'll spit first!!"..."i'll spit first???"...like he the shit but with his 5lines he still a twerp..asin he sucks

ur structure really sucks..i think its hight time u duck
and u so outta luck,therre aint no room for an ugly fuck <<<<<his structure sucks..and he an ugly fuck(av seen his pic)..so he outta luck cos ugly fuck never get buck...

the rules said 10 lines..but i c u too foolish and blind<<<<<<<<<<<<he dropped 5lines

u r lyrically slacking boo..guess its too much of jafool<<<<<<<he gatta be listening to jarule a lil too much...cos its obvious to me...and if u looking for the rhyme on this 1 its "boo" & "fool"...when u say "fool" u donnt really hear the "l" so they rhyme


im dont with this fake,cos he nothing but a hoecake<<<<<<he a phony cos he said he rapping for fun..but then he says "its him againt the world".........omg.....and i noticed i was the 11th line so i ended it up like this...weak closing tho but its ok for me......

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uppin this bitch yo.............peeps vote

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yeh youve seen my pic bitch so what
you just jealous cuz i got skillz you got not
and ur saying my lyrics made no fucking sense
i didnt waste time explaining what they fuckin meant
i aint normally a sexist but yo bitch ass pushed it
so go back to brushing your hair cuz your rhymes are full of bullshit
and i asked if i was going first,i never said i was gunna
but you insisted so now whos the dumb fuck huh
i dont think we're supposed to say no offence to each other
so get out of the rap game and go back to fucking your brother

uppin for votes,vote for me
not this fucking bitch mc

mATW
structure isnt very consistent...u started out with short lines...then went to long lines...flow fell off due to the lack of consistency...no multis...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

XxXstasy
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few multis...wordplay wasnt good...some of ur punches connected...decent personals....

Overall
neither had good wordplay...XxXstasy had the better structure...the more stable flow...more multis...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that..XxXstasy gets my vote...

VOTE - XXXSTASY

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on thfirst link in my sig against hotshh!...thanx...

The poll on this battle is closed.

But you should still return the favor with an honest vote, as i left my honest opinion.

And thats werd.


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-Cprogress

lmmfaoooo u lil twit fed from my verse.......apart from the fact that u werent to drop again..........lmfao....

*grabs my dictionary*


i aint normally the sexiest but my bitch ass pushed it..........


so go back to brushing your hair cuz your rhymes are full of bullshit.......

i dont get a shit

uppin

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Were you planning to return the favor with an honest vote, or is that out of the equation?

uppin

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well since da polls r closed i cant vote damn oh i woulda had 2 pick xxxtasy not jus her structure was lil better but bcuz i looked at ya'll rules matw i dont remember spittin 2 verses each bein part of them so yea good job over both of ya peace


Unexplained vote

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^^xplain ya vote better damn it.........lol

uppin

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Aight this was a Ok battle, yah Both Need to elevate, I liked Both of your verses...

Mulit: N/A
Rhyems:X
Structure:X
Personals:Not really.. But I would say X if any
Flow: MatW
Meta's: X
WordPlay: X

Matw

Bro, you know how to Rhyem, yah just gotta take it to the Next Level Now, Read some shit on How to Elevate, or look at some Vets Battles.. too See how they Use Wordplay... No hat'n... Should have put more Effort into the Verse also.. seems like you didnt care...

Rated Verse: 3/10


XxXstacy

Not a Bad Verse, But were not Stupid in here, we can figure out what yah Spitting about, Anyway.. Tight Verse.. Gotta get Harder Punches in there.. Just keep working at it..

Rated Verse: 5/10


Vote: XxXstacy


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