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5 | 62.50% |
| Word processor |
  
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3 | 37.50% |
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08-02-04, 02:28 AM
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~God Of The Metaphore~
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Word processor vs intensify effect
IP: CEE9 1CB9
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08-02-04, 02:29 AM
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IP: CEE9 1CB9
Word processor has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 01:29 AM.
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08-02-04, 03:13 AM
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#3
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~God Of The Metaphore~
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IP: CEE9 1CB9
guess i'll just do this right quick
- im tired of kids like you talkin lika menace watch your sweettalk because i check mouths lika dentist please believe i disconnect emmcees from tha matrix after i rob you'll be so broke you'll need a fix your flow is garbage and has no purpose like tha president dying for tha secret service your worthless and you flow lika constipated ass i flow like Od'ed on ex-lax that shit drops fast closer- your easily cooked like boiling water your record is lopsided like a teter toter |
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08-03-04, 01:02 AM
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#4
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IP: 19F7 7629
intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 12:02 AM.
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08-03-04, 01:46 AM
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#5
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Banned
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IP: 19F7 7629
u aint fucking with me even if ya verse was to snuggle up
cuz this win 4 me is safe like a buckle up chuckle up, cuz thats what happen when peep view ya verse we would understand if u no-show cuz ya skill would make ya look worse till how u want this loss with creative punches or just one shot that'll have u on ya back like crunches 2-3, thats weak but between u and me understand beating me would take 2 of me truly see there aint no strain in my verse cuz im soon gonna carry this W up like a hurse bitch, bang bang.... dished out in 6 min..... |
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08-03-04, 01:48 AM
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Banned
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IP: 19F7 7629
ooo-shit i thought u was gonna no-show so i ass'ed my verse.....
can i drop a quick verse in 5 min??? to replace this which i bull-shited since i thought u was gonna no-show??? dag... |
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08-03-04, 04:13 AM
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#7
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<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP: 88E6 6CAA
Voted For: intensify effect
hmm.i personally liked this verse better i found the punches connected solidly..flow was ok vocab was decent..nothin 2 special but it was all the punches..nice wording in your verse i think thats what made your punches more efective.. hit this up:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139217
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08-04-04, 12:50 PM
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Banned
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IP: 19F7 7629
upp'in i guess,
with my half-ass verse........... |
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08-04-04, 12:54 PM
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#9
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IP: 59B3 099F
Voted For: intensify effect
Word Proc- Flow Was Good, Punchs Were Eh, Some Wordplay Concepts Played Inten- Ok Had Some Metas, Flow Was Ok... Struc As Good, nd Punces Were Ok... Punches- Tie Flow- Word Metaphors- Inten Wordplay-Tie Structure- Inten Originality- Tie Multis- Niether Final Vote- Intensify Effect Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138077
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08-16-04, 08:02 PM
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Banned
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IP: 20B5 2D66
upp"in this battle............
long ova due already......... |
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08-17-04, 05:57 PM
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Banned
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IP: 20B5 2D66
upp"in this battle............
long ova due already......... |
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08-19-04, 09:28 PM
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Banned
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IP: 20B5 2D66
vote.....
drop link....... N i'll return the favor of a vote....... |
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08-20-04, 04:18 PM
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#13
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Flyweight
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IP: CC64 0500
Voted For: Word processor
My vote goes to Word Processor I think that Intensifys verse lack imagination and Words verse had better word play and intensify. Also nothin about intensifys verse really stood out to me, not that it was a bad verse, its just nothing came at me like... WOW that shit was good. and to be honest neither did word but he did have better planned punches and a better planned verse in my eyes so for those reasons my vote goes to Word Processor and can you return the favour (Intensify) wiv my battle against Word Processor.... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143304
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08-20-04, 08:17 PM
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Banned
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IP: 18CC 30C4
what^^? lame cats.....
upp'in this battle...... |
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08-20-04, 08:34 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: intensify effect
ok: intensify effect:i liked the flow of ya verse, the continued rhyme scheme from the first lines of your verse to the second bar, nice punches and you never fell off, good job, ya closer was good too, word: your flow was ok, but kinda fell of a bit towards the end, tho i liked your punches too, good job overall vote:intensify for punches and flow
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